Gelid Insentient Hands

Sense no Scathe

Sense no Wounding’s

I'm Unceasing ere of reverberate

I didn't detect thee

Trammelling ego into Manifestations

Deeming self-back and nothing to loose

Shut my eyes and tear started falling

I hold my mentum up and here grimace recidivate

I swallowed your old note

Which you left inside my dak (pant)

I looked up and wawled

I asked for you back in my life

You're long gone

You’re already dead & numb

I felt your cold & insensate hands

I looked up and squalled louder

My anguish was so loud

Even god cried with rain water

I had your retentiveness’s

They washed with rain I found

I have noone left now

I lost you and felt that torment

I wish this mishap I could rewind

I desire you back

I desire you alive

Without you I'm already demise

Author's Note

Just went with the flow. Need you review :)

Reviews

[Prritiy]

Even god cried with rain water
I had your retentiveness’s
They washed with rain I found
I have noone left now
I lost you and felt that torment
I wish this mishap I could rewind
I desire you back
I desire you alive
Without you I'm already demise


a painful write, nicely written.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much dearie :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome.

[sakshi arora]

i really liked it though i had to go through the dictionary 3 tyms :p

[Vikrantsingh]

Its ok Sakshi :) Earlier this use to happen me :)
Its just a simple poem which rushed into my sane and i flow it on WC :)

I'm happy you liked it :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[sakshi arora]

your welcome

[Will Neill]

quite intense.good work.
Will

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Will. I just got back to my old time and I really miss my friend who died in road accident this is tribute to him :)

Thanks :)
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Even god cried with rain water

I had your retentiveness’s

They washed with rain I found

I have noone left now

I lost you and felt that torment"
A very good write fellow poet. All flows greatly...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you my friend Sami :)
- Cheers!
Singh:)

[Sami Khalil]

Always welcome my friend...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:) thank again

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :).........

[Vikrantsingh]

:)......................