Love of donkey's years

Simply Stuck and I went with the flow

Your heart is pure like Ocean

Your mind is clear as Sky

Your belief is deeper than nitty-gritty

Your resourcefulness is Equanimity

 

Your gumption follows ofttimes

You made me grin at times

You diverted me from seeing red

You’re postponement even my morose

 

Love you is what, I can feel

Abide with me all, I can fain

Loving me was your métier

Kissing me was what your essayer

 

I dethaw when you nuzzle unwaveringly

I dissolve when you suspire solely

I deem you on my pectus

Will beg you so that never depart

Thanks To Frieda :)

Author's Note

Just need your views reviews.

Reviews

[Will Neill]

Vik's I took a look at this one just off the top, I belive you are speaking from the heart and have drawn on your emotions to convey a tender yet light hearted poem. My only dislike is the font you used but thats just me. Nice piece. (I will read each in turn)- I have added you as a friend and look forward to reading more.
Keep Well.
Will

[Vikrantsingh]

Hey Mate Thank you so much. I really cherish your support and encouragement which you are putting forward :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sirius King]

nice flow

sweet intimate write

very nice!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Serenus :)
Loved your views :)

Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Ahhh luverly Singh, a few grammatical errors, but it's still a very strong and affecting read, nice my friend!

[Vikrantsingh]

Love you Frieda :)
Its just what i was thinking today ;) I love you guys simply make me smile.
Could you point out those mistakes please i will change it :)

[Frieda P]

Check your 'you & yours, and you're'....not really that big of a deal, you're so sweet hun! :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks, if that really doesn't matter much then I will leave it as it is!
Thanks again :)
read moreThanks, if that really doesn't matter much then I will leave it as it is!
Thanks again :)
Smiles :)
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

A little different from your other writes but I like it a lot. It flows and rhymes greatly...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much, You're the 1st person who always review my poems :)
Thanks Mate :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:) ^ - ^

[Sami Khalil]

☺☻♦♣♠•◘○

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow, you made me smile ☺☻

[Sami Khalil]

:):):)

[Vikrantsingh]

:P :P :P