Love of donkey's years

Simply Stuck and I went with the flow

Your heart is pure like Ocean

Your mind is clear as Sky

Your belief is deeper than nitty-gritty

Your resourcefulness is Equanimity

 

Your gumption follows ofttimes

You made me grin at times

You diverted me from seeing red

You’re postponement even my morose

 

Love you is what, I can feel

Abide with me all, I can fain

Loving me was your métier

Kissing me was what your essayer

 

I dethaw when you nuzzle unwaveringly

I dissolve when you suspire solely

I deem you on my pectus

Will beg you so that never depart

Thanks To Frieda :)

Author's Note

Just need your views reviews.

Reviews

[Will Neill]

Vik's I took a look at this one just off the top, I belive you are speaking from the heart and have drawn on your emotions to convey a tender yet light hearted poem. My only dislike is the font you used but thats just me. Nice piece. (I will read each in turn)- I have added you as a friend and look forward to reading more.
Keep Well.
Will

[Vikrantsingh]

Hey Mate Thank you so much. I really cherish your support and encouragement which you are putting forward :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[smilempsn]

I liked the flow of this piece.. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Smile :)
Appreciate your reviews
Simply love them :)

Thanks dear :)
Singh :)

[NA]

wonderfully done...enjoyed :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks you so much Raven, I'm happy you love this piece of work :)
-Singh :)

[Astro]

I can sense the emotion, but couldn't get passed the language in this one.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Astro, You're reviews always put smile across my face.
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

"Charming to touch, the beauty your heart rhymes me with the beats that make its waves for you. A thought of a thousand words written in less than what my soul has yet to find. What a reminder there is a heartbeat of innocence and purity where clarity is the norm and fondness is the conscience.

Lovers assure, Soul mates endure and when the calm breaks they persevere in the tempest as they stand in the eye of it all."

My thought of it :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for your kind words mate :)
I'm happy you loved this poem :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[tuvi]

nice one viks ...
loved these lines
"Your gumption follows ofttimes
You made me grin at times & I dethaw when you nuzzle unwaveringly
I dissolve when you suspire solely
I deem you on my pectus
Will beg you so that never depart"

when u write..... i can read your thoughts ...

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Tuvi :) Much Appreciated :)

Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful love poem singh. You're a smooth character.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks BR :) You always make me smile with your comments :)

[SyberRose]

I like the nitty gritty sentence too...a couple of the words I didnt know what they meant but enjoyed...Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Rose, Much Appreciated - You're comments means a lot to this poet :)

- Singh :)

[Shaun Payton]

The views reviews..."Your beliefs are deeper than nitty-gritty" I love that line Singh. Its a sweet sentiment from a loving heart that is for sure. Next time watch those you, your, and you're. Other than no other criticisms of this sweet sweet poem.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much mate :)
Much Appreciated :)

Singh :)

[Shaun Payton]

You are welcome Singh:)

[Marie]

I'm not sure what you've done here, but I like it. I like your phrasing, and your interesting choice of words.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Marie - You're comments and mature understanding will help me to work more and execute more in terms of learning new ideas :)

Smiles :)
Singh :)