My Dearest Dad ~

It won't rhyme, It just holds special moments which passed by - My Dad My Hero.

It was your Aroha
Which got me, into your life
You're there when I was born
You hold me intact and felt me tight with a smile
I was One when you bought me my 1st toy
I cried, I cried, I cried.
You always hugged me close and tight
When I was Two you took me to the park side
As I keep growing young
You kept growing old by my side
It was love which kept enhancing
Towards me from your heart deep inside
When I turned up Sixteen
You got me my favourite watch
I looked up and said thank you & I forgot to hug you
As it went time passed by until I was Twenty-Four
My mood went high
I laughed at you
I even made fun sometimes

You made me a Man (Independent & Educated) 
I never knew what it takes to be a Father
Until I turned up one
I got married 
I even fought, Yelled several times
You told me "Beta (Son) - Calm Down it’s your turn to be a father"
Next Year I became one (I’m a Father now)
Those old days came jiffy and your life just Rewind
Now when I hold my daughter in my hands
I felt the same you felt that time.
You gave your sleep, you food & even your time.
I can't pay you back those days
but now I guarantee you I won't hurt anymore.

Love you Paa, even more :) 

Author's Note

Love to My Father :) On Father's Day.
It might not be the best but yes its all what went in my life :)

Reviews

[Supercop]

I even fought, Yelled several times
You told me "Beta (Son) - Calm Down it’s your turn to be a father"
Next Year I became one (I’m a Father now)
Those old days came jiffy and your life just Rewind
Now when I hold my daughter in my hands
I felt the same you felt that time.
You gave your sleep, you food & even your time.
I can't pay you back those days
but now I guarantee you I won't hurt anymore.

Wonderfully written your feeling got proper directions

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Shubhangi]

written very well..i went n hugged my father after reading this.
n thank you for the review on my 1st poem.it helped.

[Titan]

You made me a Man (Independent & Educated) 
I never knew what it takes to be a Father
Until I turned up one
I got married 
I even fought, Yelled several times
You told me "Beta (Son) - Calm Down it’s your turn to be a father"

What a saying here you narrated goof job :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

It was your Aroha
Which got me, into your life
You're there when I was born
You hold me intact and felt me tight with a smile
I was One when you bought me my 1st toy
I cried, I cried, I cried.
You always hugged me close and tight
When I was Two you took me to the park side

You love your dad so much nice to see this.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

Wonderful writing.....thank you :-)

A father is someone that
holds your hand at the fair
makes sure you do what your mother says
holds back your hair when you are sick
brushes that hair when it is tangled because mother is too busy
lets you eat ice cream for breakfast
but only when mother is away
he walks you down the aisle
and tells you everything's gonna be okay

[Vikrantsingh]

Vani - your words made me cry you told so much with so little words.. :)
I'm a father I can understand how deep those words carry deeper down inside

[Prritiy]

Beautiful! tears in my eyes :)
I love my Papa n Mummy too :)
Regards to your Papa and loads of love to your daughter.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :) I loved your review :)
Stay bless and love to your papa and maa :)
-Singh :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Durga roy]

Its a really very beautiful poem.:) Yeah, its true, we often feel the value of our parents only when they left us behind. It reminds me my father whom i lost when i was in class six. :(
Thank you.:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Aww.. I'm really sorry to read this Durga :(
No issues :) You have a great life ahead and you paa is still loving you from heaven :)
Stay blessed and keep smiling - God Bless you :)
- Singh :)

[Durga roy]

Thank you so much.:)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome dear :)

[Sherlock]

beautiful poem very touchy and true excellent writing !!! loved the way you showed time pass and growing up!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Neha :)
Yes this is what I can say Ah! that was amazing time and I've learned a lot from my mistakes :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sherlock]

so sweet :)

[Vikrantsingh]

:) Welcome dearie :)

[Sherlock]

:) !!!!!!!

[Red Raven]

'You gave your sleep, you food & even your time.
I can't pay you back those days'
- so true. thanks for giving the chance to read this.

[Vikrantsingh]

Red Raven, Thank you so much for you time and understanding o f this topic so well. I hope everyone needs a father and he's the best persona to guide you out of any issue and problem :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Red Raven]

Being an orphan i envy you and the depth of love you have for him. bless you and your dad. thanks for the reply.

[Vikrantsingh]

I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you dear :(
Well we have friend around to help each other, You could rely on me :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Red Raven]

thank you. no, its okay, it taught me about life...in a different positive way. Lord help us all. bless you.

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome Red Raven :) God Bless you :)
-Singh :)