Life I want to Live

It doesn't rhyme but has all what i want in real :) and got what i was looking for

I can't buy you expensive diamond rings
I can't buy you that expensive dress you like
I can buy you few chocolates & roses
I can give you what I have; my heart which loves you pure.

I have a dream to give you a car
I even have a dream to give you a home
Where we will both live and enjoy life
I will come home from work, you will kiss me

You will share your work, and tell me you missed me
I will hug you tight and take you to the bedroom
We will make love, enjoyment and fun
We will sleep holding each other’s comfort

I would love to have you in my life
To complete it and to be my wife
Love has been all lies till now
Just be with me and I will do as you want

Author's Note

Just review it ;) Thanks again

Reviews

[tuvi]

rhyme and sync is not always whats required in poetry ...
U need to have the feelings and a person to understand those feelings .....when anyone is able to relate to your work to themselves ...that's the true task achieve because you were able to touch someone's life/ heart even if little but your thoughts struck them ....

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Tuvi :)
Your review always bring smile on my face ;)

God bless you :)
-Singh :)

[tuvi]

aww .. thank you viks.. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Love and passion flow from your nice words...Well done as always ...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Sami ^ - ^

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

;)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Vikrantsingh]

:P

[Sami Khalil]

:P

[Prritiy]

I loved it, so full of love. .. and not to miss saying the 'Up' pic caught my attention :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Prritiy :)

Thanks for your review :)

Singh :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Vikrantsingh]

^ - ^

[Prritiy]

:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:D

[SyberRose]

Loving thoughts from a man in love...Love is the most important...not material things...Enjoyed Singh:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Rose :)
I always love you reviews and you comments :) Thanks :)

Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Doesn't have to rhyme Singh, it has to come from a place of pure feelings, this one came from your heart, very lovely sentiments on this page. The picture cracked me up....!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Frieda :)
I simply love this Movie - UP
So i got this picture from net and decided to add this :)

Cheers!
Thanks you loved it :)
Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Was a great movie, never expected her to die though in the very beginnning, what the heck? My pleasure Singh :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes same here. I expected it will go long way :(

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write. Love is more precious than all the material possessions in the world.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you brandon :) Loved your comment :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

My pleasure. After all love is all we need...maybe someday

[Vikrantsingh]

:)

[Mark]

Very sweet. There are some grammatical errors, but the love shines through.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Mark :).. You can point out those error i will make changes :)

[Vikrantsingh]

So Sweet Mark :) Thank you :)

Much Appreciated :)

[Mark]

here is an edited version...

I can't buy you expensive diamond rings
I can't buy you that expensive dress you like
I can buy you few chocolates & roses
I can give you what I have; my heart which loves you pure.

I have a dream to give you a car
I even have a dream to give you a home
Where we will both live and enjoy life
I will come home from work, you will kiss me

You will share your work, and tell me you missed me
I will hug you tight and take you to the bedroom
We will make love, enjoyment and fun
We will sleep holding each other’s comfort

I would love to have you in my life
To complete it and to be my wife
Love has been all lies till now
Just be with me and I will do as you want

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you again :)