Life I want to Live

It doesn't rhyme but has all what i want in real :) and got what i was looking for

I can't buy you expensive diamond rings
I can't buy you that expensive dress you like
I can buy you few chocolates & roses
I can give you what I have; my heart which loves you pure.

I have a dream to give you a car
I even have a dream to give you a home
Where we will both live and enjoy life
I will come home from work, you will kiss me

You will share your work, and tell me you missed me
I will hug you tight and take you to the bedroom
We will make love, enjoyment and fun
We will sleep holding each other’s comfort

I would love to have you in my life
To complete it and to be my wife
Love has been all lies till now
Just be with me and I will do as you want

Author's Note

Just review it ;) Thanks again

Reviews

[tuvi]

rhyme and sync is not always whats required in poetry ...
U need to have the feelings and a person to understand those feelings .....when anyone is able to relate to your work to themselves ...that's the true task achieve because you were able to touch someone's life/ heart even if little but your thoughts struck them ....

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Tuvi :)
Your review always bring smile on my face ;)

God bless you :)
-Singh :)

[tuvi]

aww .. thank you viks.. :)

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

Awwww! nice poem :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Pallavi :)

Thanks you so much :)

[Onku Ghosh]

A romantic.








A romantic poem that you excel in.Very well wrtten. You have poured out your innermost feelings
here.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Mate :)
Much Appreciated :)

[Dhaye]

The ever romantic guy from India speaks again. No need of rhyming, Singh. As long as you have that honesty in this piece which is of course dedicated to your lovely wife, this is so lovely.

Keep writing!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Dhaye :) Loved your review as always!
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

wonderful poem piece..not all in life can be bought with money, - the most precious things can not, as it`s love! I liked the flow of verses, very good rhymes, the end contains all the wisdom, and really powerful for people who don`t realize where is the Good love and real one...wonderful.

-nour-
11.06.013

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sugar Plum :)
I really cherish your comment/review :)

Cheers!read moreThank you so much Sugar Plum :)
I really cherish your comment/review :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Shivam Murari]

"Love has been all lies till now
Just be with me and I will do as you want"

That's one really effective line. Meter is getting fine to better now. I see you have improved tremendously in my hiatus! Very nice :)
One rare romantic piece :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Muaah Bro thank you so much :)
having Coke :P
Enjoy :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Shivam Murari]

I'm Happy, Free, Confused and Lonely at the same time ;-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lmao :P
Don't be so many adjectives at same time ;)

[Shivam Murari]

arre! Haven't u heard 22 by Taylor? Do it now then! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

I will :) as you say :)

[Shivam Murari]

link is here sir

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AgFeZr5ptV8

[Vikrantsingh]

GOt it already ;) download .mp3 file :D

[Shivam Murari]

hwzzat?

[Vikrantsingh]

Awesome ;)

[Traci]

Rhyme is not the most important thing here Singh. This is a lovely endearing write, one that is penned beautifully displaying much honesty. Personal thoughts, words that came from your heart and soul, enabling each reader to connect with the emotions. To not only read the words, but feel the romance, the passion, the longing. And that is what makes a great poem, my friend. Job well done!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks VITD :)
Much Appreciated your review :)
Loved it :)

Thanks :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Astro]

The search for love and romantic avowals of devotion are very nice here Singh. Whether it rhymed or not, you have written some very personal thoughts in a way that is endearing and easily connected to the thoughts of many a reader I'm sure.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Astro, I really cherish you words :) loved them.
Thank you so much.
Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

A lovely romantic poem. Great work singh.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Baby Ricochet :)
Loved your review :)

[Kristin Lee]

Spoken from the heart. Its very touching.

[Vikrantsingh]

Kristin Lee thank you so much :)

[Shaun Payton]

For the expression this contains, from a self speaking to a love, the I beginnings work for me. I think its a lovely endearing writing.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Shaun :) Much Appreciated :)

[Shaun Payton]

You are most welcome Vikrantsingh:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:)