Chocolate Love

You Are My Darkest Fantasy

On my lips

On my fingertips

The more I rub you harder

It starts getting better

Deep inside me

When I feel making love to thee

I have you beside

I lick you, I tasted my divine

You taste sweet melted sugar

I tasted them Oh! Yes

When they mixed up with you lips

On my finger tips

On her juicy lips

Oh! I love your smell

Oh! I love to yell

You are sweet as sex

You're better when I'm vex

Melted you're

Better you're

Slow you melt

Better I felt

Reviews

[¿]

You didn't do right, you just didn't do right!!
Now who'll stop me from emptying the last few chocolates left in my freezer?!😂
You should think about a chocolate lovers lovely teeths....😢
But this one is mind melting chocolaty poem😊

[Cybertooth]

When they mixed up with you lips
On my finger tips
On her juicy lips
Oh! I love your smell
Oh! I love to yell
You are sweet as sex
You're better when I'm vex
Melted you're
Better you're
Slow you melt
Better I felt

Great and chocolaty melting nicely penned..

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

Yummy this one is chocolaty and this treat was great for my eyes and senses

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Traci]

Very nice Singh, this read makes for some good chocolaty fun.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Traci, I'm glad you liked it :)
-Singh :)

[SyberRose]

I love chocolate but not that much haa...cute one Singh...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Rose :)

I bet this chocolate is better and sugar free :D

- Singh ;)

[Tina]

oh now I want its sweetness on my lips!
awesome poem sir! it really got me thinking ;>

[Vikrantsingh]

Sounds Tempting.. Yes this Chocolate is so much tempting and really is appealing :)
- Singh :)

[Flutterby aish]

I love chocolates.....and your poem was soooo damn chocolaty....gosh.....stated with a chocolate n then flows on to your lover.......literally......right now after reading this poem of yours all I want is a dark chocolate in my had n my crush sitting right next to me in a black shirt looking intently at me as I lick the chocolate.......GOSH.......YOUR POEM LITERALLY MADE ME DRIFT AWAY INTO MY FANTASY WORLD!!!!!!! Oh boy........you are an amazing writer and this piece of yours is extremely erotic, sensual, tempting,intoxicating and most of all CHOCOLATY like hell!!!! Loved it.......100/100!!!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Aish, Gosh! 100/100. I'm pleased.
You must try this ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Flutterby aish]

hahaha......sure!!!!!! ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

;)
^ - ^

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love chocolate and i liked the "sexual" description of this piece :) sweet chocolate fantasy with nice soft color and too sensual ...lovely taste :)

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11.06.013

[Vikrantsingh]

;) Thanks again Sugar ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

Sweet as choclate , dripping like love...Well done...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Mate :P

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure , mate...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

;) ^ - ^

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

:D

[Sami Khalil]

:P

[Vikrantsingh]

hahahahahaha :P

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

Chocolaty poem was too chocolaty. In starting I felt like I was in world of chocolate.
The poem starts with love for chocolate and slowly the love becomes for your lover. very well expression of love and chocolate :) :P

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Pallavi ;)
I really cherish your comments on my poems :)
Thanks again :)

Singh :)

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

You are always welcome Vikrant :)

[Vikrantsingh]

^ - ^