Love of My Life

Her name is Kavita

I would offer & like to kiss her?

She's sweet as marshmallow

I owe my heart my pulsations

She sprang up dulcet gesture

Which I know that for me

Eyes are big and round

I sprang up it my world

She's got blushful lips

Flaunting my hereafter in it

When they kiss me

I ofttimes miss her!

It has to be the hug which we share

Moreover it’s the dream I care.

She is in my life as love

I kept her to my pith dearie

We had some cherubic memories

I love them to hold dear entire

Her affection/heart is pure as angel

Which drew me to found philia?

Her hair is consecutive

Her voice is like Honey Bee

I simply can't resist her

I won’t find someone like her

Author's Note

Would love to see your reviews on this one :)

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Singh, once again I want to congratulate your wife for having you as her husband. She's really lucky to have you in her life. You're so sweet and romantic.

I just want to give the following suggestions to improve this piece, just little slips you have to fix:
*the title "My Love of life" may sound better if it's "Love of My Life"
*I would offer & like to kiss here?----here - her
*I ofttimes miss me!--------me - her
*Moreover it’s my dream I care.----my - the
*Which drew me to found philia? ------ found - find (? not needed)

Singh, again, this is sweet and romantic. Good job. Keep writing.

[tuvi]

dhaye has done the job of pointing out the slips :)

[Vikrantsingh]

:D hehehehehehehehehe thanks Dhaye :P
I will make those changes sure ;)

Thanks again :)
Singh :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Done made changes :)

[smilempsn]

woopie.. Lovely dedication for ur lovely wife... You gifted this lovely piece to her, on account of her coming back home kya.. :P
She must be totally flattered by this..

gud gud.. nice piece .. Even though I have to search for meaning of some words :P

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks dear, loved your comments :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[SyberRose]

Isnt love grand ha...well its time to buy that engagement ring ha...enjoyed reading Singh...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Syberrose thank you and nice idea I would buy gift as it coming my wedding anniversary whilst :)
read moreSyberrose thank you and nice idea I would buy gift as it coming my wedding anniversary whilst :)
Thanks again :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

"We had some cherubic dreams" Great line. A very sweet, romantic poem. Great job Singh.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Ricochet :)

[Frieda P]

Wow what an adoring tribute to your special someone....you're quite the lover Singh, ha...love it, it's sweet and I can tell you're dazzled by this woman for sure! What is 'philia'?

[Vikrantsingh]

Philia/affection - A positive feeling of liking
Thanks again Frieda :) Its again for my wife ;)
Her name is kavita :D
Thanks again :D

[Frieda P]

Ha I hope it was for your wife, or you're in big trouble! ;-)

Ahh, never heard that word before, see now I learn something from you my friend....my pleasure Singh.

[Vikrantsingh]

Awww.. I don't like trouble either ;) they are better far away from me :D
Cool thanks Frieda :)
Much appreciated .. we learn from each other :D

[Frieda P]

Yep, that's why we're here to share our love of poetry and learn a little something along the way. Always my pleasure Singh. :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

"She sweet as marshmallow

I owe my heart my pulsations

She sprang up dulcet gesture

Which I know that for me

Eyes are big and round

I sprang up it my world

She's got blushful lips"
Another great hopeless romantic on this site...Good work...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol hopeless :P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...( That is a compliment by the way )

[Vikrantsingh]

Oh, I know mate you are something so :P

[Sami Khalil]

^^~ ^^ :)

[Vikrantsingh]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

:):):)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol :P

[Sami Khalil]

:P

[Vikrantsingh]

Hahahahaha your funny Sami :P

[Sami Khalil]

:):):)

[Vikrantsingh]

:P

[Sami Khalil]

hahaha...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

GN Mate