Hugs & Kisses We Share

Hugs & Kisses We Share

A Poem by Vikrantsingh
"

Every Single Moment I spent, with you was way special and breath taking - Love You...

"


Hugs & Kisses which we spare 
for the loved one with which we care 
we knew they exist 
they intent to persist 
Love someone special touches me 
I feel sharing intense power to be. 
Hug & Kisses all I'm waiting for 
give me one or two give me even more 
I will hug you every second of my life 
will count then till # ten & nine. 
It makes me feel special & fine. 
When your skin touches mine. 
I feel it special & polish as wine. 
We had some special chemistry 
I would love to make history 
I will crouch on my knees 
and ask you to set me free 
Love me, kiss me, hug me. 
All I want is you and me. 
You hold my vest 
I let you indulge inside my chest 
I love thee nice low. 
You kiss me slow 
Sometime I went fast 
It’s my call you said 
You hold and kissed me again 
first base me, I want forever 
Let me be on your chest forever 
In your arms on your lips moreover 
In your life as a wife forever and ever 
We are intact 
We are tight 
I enjoy all kiss & hug we share 
Ever I got from you is love and extra care.... 

Love you always :)



© 2013 Vikrantsingh


Author's Note

Vikrantsingh
Hugs & Kisses which we all share, do care and review its with your lovely words :)

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You are becoming like Jack when it comes to being romantic. You made another sweet poem, Singth.

However, like I always do, I'll help you improve this piece in my simple ways...
"For the loved one with which we care ----------loved ones
We knew they exists" -------exist

"I feel sharing intense power to we" -------- to be

"Give me one, two give me even more" -------- Give me one or two, give me even more

"You hold me kissed me again ------------ You hold and kiss me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever " ---------Cuddle me, I want it forever


Singh, you are so sweet and kind. She's so blessed having you as her husband. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Dhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulf.. read more
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Done made all changes as you told :) thank you
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, Singh. :)



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Singh my friend, you're a sweetheart of a guy. Lovely poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Thank you sooooo much Ricochet

Cheers!
Singh :)
"I love thee nice low.
You kiss me slow
"Sometime I went fast
Its my call you said
You hold me kissed me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever
Let me be on your chest forever
In your arms on your lips moreover
In your life as a wife forever and ever "
Sweet love written in a nice poem . She should be very happy...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome,mate...:)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
It is a beautiful poem full of affection. Great job. Watch the use of your nouns though, sometimes you forgot to add an 's' to pluralize where appropriate and sometimes you added an 's' when there was no need to.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Astro thanks, your review means a lot to me. I will make those changes.
Well I hope you like t.. read more
Astro

11 Years Ago

No problem, keep it up.
You are becoming like Jack when it comes to being romantic. You made another sweet poem, Singth.

However, like I always do, I'll help you improve this piece in my simple ways...
"For the loved one with which we care ----------loved ones
We knew they exists" -------exist

"I feel sharing intense power to we" -------- to be

"Give me one, two give me even more" -------- Give me one or two, give me even more

"You hold me kissed me again ------------ You hold and kiss me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever " ---------Cuddle me, I want it forever


Singh, you are so sweet and kind. She's so blessed having you as her husband. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Dhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulf.. read more
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Done made all changes as you told :) thank you
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, Singh. :)

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