Every Single Moment I spent, with you was way special and breath taking
- Love You...
Hugs & Kisses which we spare for
the loved one with which we care we
knew they exist they
intent to persist Love
someone special touches me I feel
sharing intense power to be. Hug
& Kisses all I'm waiting for give
me one or two give me even more I will
hug you every second of my life will
count then till # ten & nine. It
makes me feel special & fine. When
your skin touches mine. I feel
it special & polish as wine. We had
some special chemistry I
would love to make history I will
crouch on my knees and
ask you to set me free Love
me, kiss me, hug me. All I
want is you and me. You
hold my vest I let
you indulge inside my chest I love
thee nice low. You
kiss me slow Sometime
I went fast It’s
my call you said You
hold and kissed me again first
base me, I want forever Let me
be on your chest forever In
your arms on your lips moreover In
your life as a wife forever and ever We are
intact We are
tight I
enjoy all kiss & hug we share Ever I
got from you is love and extra care....
You are becoming like Jack when it comes to being romantic. You made another sweet poem, Singth.
However, like I always do, I'll help you improve this piece in my simple ways...
"For the loved one with which we care ----------loved ones
We knew they exists" -------exist
"I feel sharing intense power to we" -------- to be
"Give me one, two give me even more" -------- Give me one or two, give me even more
"You hold me kissed me again ------------ You hold and kiss me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever " ---------Cuddle me, I want it forever
Singh, you are so sweet and kind. She's so blessed having you as her husband. Keep writing.
Dhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulf.. read moreDhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulfriend on WC. I will make those changes. Hope you loved the poem
"I love thee nice low.
You kiss me slow
"Sometime I went fast
Its my call you said
You hold me kissed me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever
Let me be on your chest forever
In your arms on your lips moreover
In your life as a wife forever and ever "
Sweet love written in a nice poem . She should be very happy...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Sami so much.... Thank you :) loved your review as usual
Much appeciated mate :)
-Singh .. read moreSami so much.... Thank you :) loved your review as usual
Much appeciated mate :)
-Singh :)
It is a beautiful poem full of affection. Great job. Watch the use of your nouns though, sometimes you forgot to add an 's' to pluralize where appropriate and sometimes you added an 's' when there was no need to.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Astro thanks, your review means a lot to me. I will make those changes.
Well I hope you like t.. read moreAstro thanks, your review means a lot to me. I will make those changes.
Well I hope you like the share :)
Much appreciated :) mate
You are becoming like Jack when it comes to being romantic. You made another sweet poem, Singth.
However, like I always do, I'll help you improve this piece in my simple ways...
"For the loved one with which we care ----------loved ones
We knew they exists" -------exist
"I feel sharing intense power to we" -------- to be
"Give me one, two give me even more" -------- Give me one or two, give me even more
"You hold me kissed me again ------------ You hold and kiss me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever " ---------Cuddle me, I want it forever
Singh, you are so sweet and kind. She's so blessed having you as her husband. Keep writing.
Dhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulf.. read moreDhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulfriend on WC. I will make those changes. Hope you loved the poem