Every Single Moment I spent, with you was way special and breath taking
- Love You...
Hugs & Kisses which we spare for
the loved one with which we care we
knew they exist they
intent to persist Love
someone special touches me I feel
sharing intense power to be. Hug
& Kisses all I'm waiting for give
me one or two give me even more I will
hug you every second of my life will
count then till # ten & nine. It
makes me feel special & fine. When
your skin touches mine. I feel
it special & polish as wine. We had
some special chemistry I
would love to make history I will
crouch on my knees and
ask you to set me free Love
me, kiss me, hug me. All I
want is you and me. You
hold my vest I let
you indulge inside my chest I love
thee nice low. You
kiss me slow Sometime
I went fast It’s
my call you said You
hold and kissed me again first
base me, I want forever Let me
be on your chest forever In
your arms on your lips moreover In
your life as a wife forever and ever We are
intact We are
tight I
enjoy all kiss & hug we share Ever I
got from you is love and extra care....
You are becoming like Jack when it comes to being romantic. You made another sweet poem, Singth.
However, like I always do, I'll help you improve this piece in my simple ways...
"For the loved one with which we care ----------loved ones
We knew they exists" -------exist
"I feel sharing intense power to we" -------- to be
"Give me one, two give me even more" -------- Give me one or two, give me even more
"You hold me kissed me again ------------ You hold and kiss me again
Cuddling me, as I want forever " ---------Cuddle me, I want it forever
Singh, you are so sweet and kind. She's so blessed having you as her husband. Keep writing.
Dhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulf.. read moreDhaye thank you so much.... Every time I see your review I smile and fell happy to have a wonderfulfriend on WC. I will make those changes. Hope you loved the poem
Love someone special touches me
I feel sharing intense power to be.
Hug & Kisses all I'm waiting for
give me one or two give me even more
I will hug you every second of my life
will count then till # ten & nine.
It makes me feel special & fine.
When your skin touches mine.
Great lines and touching ones.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
Love someone special touches me
I feel sharing intense power to be.
Hug & Kisses all I'm waiting for
give me one or two give me even more
I will hug you every second of my life
will count then till # ten & nine.
It makes me feel special & fine.
When your skin touches mine.
I feel it special & polish as wine.
Wow this is good
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
You hold and kissed me again
first base me, I want forever
Let me be on your chest forever
In your arms on your lips moreover
In your life as a wife forever and ever
We are intact
We are tight
I enjoy all kiss & hug we share
Ever I got from you is love and extra care....
Straight to the heart... Who read it
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
Your wife/girlfriend must be so lucky to have such a caring n loving man!!! Such a passionate poem.. I guess she inspires you. Bless you both! Keep writing and inspiring :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Yes Manali, She's my wife and yes i'm completely involved in her :)
Thank you so much :) .. read moreYes Manali, She's my wife and yes i'm completely involved in her :)
Thank you so much :)
God Bless you too :)
Singh :)
Your wife/ girlfriend should be happy with so much lovable and passionate man :) I enjoyed the poem, shows the deep need to sharing love, which everyone has inside, not always expressed...You are honest and free to express your feelings of love. Very well done.
Dhaye always does the editing work for u :) that's really of her !
and as for your poem ....i do love your writing as always
hugs and kisses to load your heart with eternal bliss of revelry
u always put me in a trance of smiles beyond measure
Smilempsn its personal opinion, not what other wrote. If liked it you liked it.
If you don't t.. read moreSmilempsn its personal opinion, not what other wrote. If liked it you liked it.
If you don't then pls say its not good. I'm ready for +ve / -ve reviews.
Take care :)
Singh :)
11 Years Ago
:) if u read my first line as well VikrantSingh parmar.. It said 'it was a nice read' which means I .. read more:) if u read my first line as well VikrantSingh parmar.. It said 'it was a nice read' which means I liked it....
I said that about others comments, coz everyone else has already told you about ur mistakes and appreciated u...
Anyways...
Thanks again :)... You know she inspires me to write all this :)
Her name it self is Poetry (K.. read moreThanks again :)... You know she inspires me to write all this :)
Her name it self is Poetry (Kavita - Indian Language)
11 Years Ago
I'm sure she does, pretty name...you're both lucky :-)