Be My Butterfly

Someone special - I wrote this one :)

Be my butterfly

Keep flying by my side

Just two words in all

I love you so much that’s all.

 

Keep showing me your colours

Keep fluttering within my heart

Do what you like

Because I'm just your type

 

Seemed so close enough

That's true you kiss me differently enough

We had all shades of love 

We have all shades of life

 

Sticking with you

Kissing you

Are just few of the things I want
just to be with you is all I ever wanted

Author's Note

Just tell me what needs to be improve in this :)

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

beautiful love poem, butterfly is a great symbol..and a gentle creature, changing in short time...It can express freedom and women`s free soul...I loved how you expressed that, also the color of butterflies are special nature art :) my favorite :
We had all shades of love
We have all shades of life

-nour-
June-013

[Vikrantsingh]

Loved it! Thanks dear hehehehehehe i'm so happy looking at the reviews :)
Much appreciated :)

Singh :)

[Sherlock]

wow !!! that was one of the best poems i have read !!! keep it up
awesome comparison using butterfly !! enjoyed it !

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow thank you so much Neha. Much Appreciated your comments and your review on this page :)
- Singh :)

[Jack...]

I have a feeling you will touch a lot of hearts with this one and have the ladies swooning and sighing here. Heads up my friend...many proposals may be on the way. :)

Very nicely done.

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow, Jack for those wonderful words :) I'm glad you visited and dropped your wonderful review :)
read moreWow, Jack for those wonderful words :) I'm glad you visited and dropped your wonderful review :)
Thanks again :)
- Singh :)

[Flutterby aish]

I think it's perfect...an amazing write.........beautiful in it's own way!!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Aish :)

Much Appreciated :)

Singh

[Flutterby aish]

Welcome! :)

[Shaun Payton]

Improve what exactly words? My friend Singh, some times a poem is wonderful and is read because its beautiful, it holds a treasure, it reminds us the hold and captivation of being in love. One lil thing perhaps that may like, "keep sitting on my heart" this a suggestion Singh, something like, "keep fluttering within my heart"
Its a beautiful sweet poem Singh:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Shaun :)

Much appreciated ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

done those changes ;)

[Shaun Payton]

You are welcome Singh. :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a lovely romantic poem.. butterfly is a nice metaphor for your wife.. almost as though she went through a transformation to be with you. Beautiful!

[Vikrantsingh]

Hehehehehehehe Thanks Lori :)

[Virtuosa X]

Sweet & innocent.

Nice job!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Virtuosa :) Much Appreciated :)

[Virtuosa X]

You're Welcome! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

^ - ^

[Dhaye]

Sweet poem, Singh. Very uplifting. And you are the bee who wants to be with the butterfly. Lol.

Anyway, I just want to ask you where are the "Just two words in all" that you are referring to? Do you mean these two phrases: "Be my butterfly, Keep flying by my side"?

A nice poem still. Keep writing, Singh.

[Vikrantsingh]

I meant to my wife - By my butterfly and keep flying by my side ..
Two words are thanks for my loving daughter :) which we are blessed with :)

Just loved the feeling to be a father to another butterfly (Daughter) :)

[Dhaye]

Ah, okay. You are a good family man, an adorable husband and father. Keep your family life harmonious always. I salute!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks dear :)
Smiles
Singh :)

[John A Raju]

cute one :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Bro :)

[Sarmelendez]

this is so sweet. I love this one that you have written the first few lines captured my attention so fast

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sarah :)