Seasonal Dis-Ease

chronic plague of mine

Mirrors and cinnamon

          water and lovely men

Chilling me, killing me tender

Every end

          comes my friend

Guilty and willfully

           slowly

                  i always surrender

Author's Note

wrote it in english lit, when i should've been discussing hamlet O.o

Reviews

[emipoemi]

¡¡In-cre-í-ble!! This is amazing and profound. (Yeah, Shakespeare doesn't have the best appeal at times xp....especially with a bad teacher).

The only critique I have about the poem is that saying "a friend" instead of "my friend" is better - adds power. Other than that: well freaking done!! Much enjoyed!

[Crow]

I am glad you did, I like the flow and well chosen words.

Well penned.