--Poem through a Len of a Schizophrenic Mind--

--Poem through a Len of a Schizophrenic Mind--

A Poem by VictorSimones
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Life in my eyes when I was a teenager hit with schizophrenia till now. How my mental state of thinking has changed. First poem ever, Trying this out

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The thoughts of a Paranoid, Schizophrenic person, with an overloaded mind
A mind seeming to indulge, and relapse through time.
The troubles of this world are no longer his,
Thus his mind is on an excursion... A Fantastical, Fictional, bid.
His judgment is clouded no clear way to go,
Reality is just strikingly surreal.
In deep though he twist and mends words and time together,
Little by little he thinks he is so everly cleaver.
But later on in life to his dismay,
He finds that this world was just but mere illusions and tricky that he Himself played.
 

© 2013 VictorSimones


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VictorSimones
Redrafting my writing that I so eagerly rushed out ahead of time without review

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I can see the flow working together, until the end. A great poem, but it sorta fizzled at the end for me.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


chandlerl

11 Years Ago

Dude...did i write that? I love this poem. IT's very well written and gives detail.

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Added on December 21, 2012
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Tags: Surrealism

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VictorSimones
VictorSimones

Antioch, CA



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Hello fellow WritersCafe users, I tend to write what happens in my life, Although i tend to add some dramatic styling to my tale so it's not all true. There is a word for this style of writing calle.. more..

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