Current of ignorance

Swimming in circles isn't right 

Endlessly trying to reach the end

Fighting to keep up with your smile

Racing against the current 

I fall down in the deep

You stay up floating 

The glimmer in your words sinks

I breathe better down here

Where no light is

None of your glimmer 

Is that what drowning is? 

Or is it salvation?

The water tickles gently 

Your words remain up in their blazing light of blindness 

In that bubble floating up and up

Mine sink down here

In the dark but clear

I keep closing my eyes

I keep trying to whisper something from afar 

As if you would understand even if I was there

So I keep my lips shut

Wouldn't it hurt you? 

To go down here

For someone with your bubble

To pop loudly and reveal the waters of the world

Author's Note

This poem is written in free verse, so please keep that in mind.

Reviews

[Cyrus Cummings]

This poem captures the tension between living a superficial life and seeking deeper, more meaningful connections. It also highlights the pain of being misunderstood and the struggle to communicate one’s true self, with passion this poem is characterized by its rich imagery, emotional depth, and thoughtful exploration of complex themes. Your ability to convey profound emotions and create vivid, symbolic landscapes makes this poem both engaging and thought-provoking.

[Victoria]

Your observations mean the world to me- the one thing I love the most is when people both feel and see the meaning behind my writing. Thank you so much!

[Arundass TP]

Beautifully written friend. Enjoyed reading 👍

[Victoria]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for giving it a shot!

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊