A beautiful fall

A beautiful fall

A Poem by Victoria

Laughing for hours on end
Smiling like God has spoken
Yet it's just their suits shining 
The long dresses that they wear, with crowns made of nothing 
Smiling and joking as the biggest farce of the world
But it's real somehow to them
Somehow accepted than feared
Feared for it's bottomless glimmer 
There all of it is lost
The unseen beauty that they don't wear
The one not shown on the big screen
But sacred for the ones who see it
Then it's the loud laughing once more
With the glimmer so bright that there is nothing left but it
They fall into it with the grace of a ballerina 
The blindness of a mole
They cry in the darkness of the night but smile to the world in the daylight
"That's just how life is like"
Their little lullaby 

© 2024 Victoria


Author's Note

Victoria
I write free verse poetry and always strive to include rhymes whenever possible.

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Artifice, facade - both, all - the means to an end. Nothing more than trying to appear bigger physically, mentally and morally than actually are. So sad when deliverance or status just asks for that little more as and when can, which might discover both self-pride and approval.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Powerful work. Tremendous writing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Victoria

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading it and I'm grateful that you got to enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
An excellently penned allegorical gem! Excellent depiction! Those with pride are always humbled in the fall, like leaves in Autumn, the tumble down into the darkness of nothingness. Their smile is fake, painted on, it hides what goes on behind the scenes when daytime has passed. Wow! A very powerful write, Victoria. I enjoyed reading it and I thank you sharing it. A very fine poem...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Victoria

4 Months Ago

I gladly appreciate your observations of my work. Your kind words mean the world to me, thank you!
Marie

4 Months Ago

Most welcome always, dear poetess...

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Added on July 18, 2024
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Victoria
Victoria

Sofia, Bulgaria



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My name is Victoria, and I am a writer with a keen interest in Philosophy, Psychology, and Medicine. I primarily write and read Mystery, Drama, Psychological Thrillers, Commentary, and Fiction. Howeve.. more..

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