Blood of the Brother - Chapter 1A Chapter by Victoria KaerThe field ran red. Blood,
it was blood, she could smell its coppery tang. A shiver totally unrelated to
fear ran down her spine. Excitement? She wasn’t sure. Why would the smell of blood excite her? She moved forward,
slinking silently through the dark shadows of the night. All was quiet now; whoever
had fought this battle was long gone. Bodies lay strewn about the clearing,
like toys left behind by a careless child. A sick, macabre child who’d broken all
his toys just to see if he could. For the simple joy of seeing them shatter in
his tiny hands. She slipped down a slight incline, slick
with blood, more shattered, broken bodies. So many of them. Why had this battle been fought? For what
purpose? Who’s enjoyment? She moved further out into the field. Nothing
moved. None had been left alive. When she’d made it to the center, she turned a
small circle, staring out over the destruction. The voice sounding behind her
made her jump. Fear raced through
her. She spun to face the voice. “Why have you come
here girl?” Girl? He was no older than her how dare he! Her
face hardened into fierce lines at his words. “I could ask you the same
question, boy.” He raised an eyebrow at her. “You could, but you won’t.” Insolent, that’s what he was. Her hand itched to smack
him. She wondered from where he had appeared. No one had been here a moment ago
of that she was certain. She studied him. He was taller than she was by several
inches, his head crowned by coppery blond hair. It was overly long, hanging
down over his forehead, almost into his eyes and it curled at the ends. It was
too dark for her to see what color his eyes were. He smiled at her, almost as
if he knew what she was thinking. “What happened here?” To avoid his smirk she
glanced out over the bloodied field as she asked the question. “A battle, even you can see that.” Again, she wanted to smack him just to wipe the smirk off
his face. “I meant the reason why.” He shrugged one shoulder. “Who knows? Why do they ever
fight battles, land, money, religion. Women.” The last was said with a huge
smile on his face. Looking her up and down. She
took a step back; he took a quick measured step forward. Not letting her put space
between them. She raised her right hand flinging it back over her shoulder,
drawing the sword the rested in the baldric across her back. The grin was firmly in place on his lips as he watched
her reach for her sword. “Do you even know how to use that sword, Rachel?” Her
eyes widened. He knew her name, but how? He took another step toward her, a
sword appearing in his hand, his broader and thicker than her own was. The hilt
set with jewels and a scorpion. She shuddered at the sight of it. He swung,
driving her back. She blocked his blow, but it cost her, sending shock waves
down her arm. He kept raining blows down on her, driving her back further,
across the field. She had to step over the bodies of the fallen. Stumbling slightly
as she did. “You can’t win, can’t beat me. I’m better.
Stronger, he made me that way.” He was insane, that was the thought that raced through
her mind. Yet there was nothing that marked him as such. His gaze was steady.
Voice measured the words even in tone. She had to win this battle; she knew it. If she lost
something bad would happen, something worse than the battle that had raged here
in this field. “Who
are you? Why are you doing this?” she asked desperately. He laughed a sick cackle that sent cold chills down her
spine, straight to her soul. “Don’t you know, can’t you guess? Can’t you see it,
Rachel? When you look at me, can’t you see
who I am? Look at me, really look at me!”
He stopped suddenly, his sword held loosely at his side. The tip brushed the
ground. She stood and stared at him. At the hair, his stance, the
way he held the sword, the way he had fought. He stepped closer and she looked
up into his eyes. His eyes, she gasped and stumbled back a step. The eyes told her
everything she needed to know. He smirked down at
her in a superior way. “You see, you know now, don’t you?” She stepped back further, shaking her head at him. It couldn’t be it was impossible! “It
can’t be,” she mumbled in a gasping little whisper. He laughed, throwing his head back. “Oh, I assure you its
very possible. I’m standing here aren’t I? Only, you see, I’m so much better.
And in the end, you will die, which is a shame really. You are so fun to look
at after all, given the reasons for it.”
She staggered back from him, tripping over her own feet
and the bodies strewn about the field, in her haste to escape him. She had to
run, get away from him. He caught her
before she’d gone only a few feet. His hand latching onto her arm and hauling her
close, so she was forced to look into those eyes of his. “Tsk tsk tsk, Rachel,
no running. He wants to see you"before I get to kill you"that is.” Her
eyes went wide as he raised the sword, bringing the jeweled hilt down with
crushing force on her temple. The world spun dizzyingly and then went a sickly
shade of black. Before she lost consciousness her last thought was that she’d lost
and just as she thought, horrible things were going to happen because she’d failed. © 2014 Victoria Kaer |
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Added on March 11, 2014 Last Updated on March 11, 2014 AuthorVictoria KaerLas Vegas, NVAboutAlways looking for constructive criticism on my writing if you read, please leave a comment. I'd appreciate anything helpful. (Things like, "It needs editing" don't help. Please tell me what you saw t.. more..Writing
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