When I Think About You ...

When I Think About You ...

A Poem by Victoria Kaer

When I think about you,

My mind goes blank

The words slip away

When I think about you,

My mind goes blank

The words slip away

Whirling,

            Twirling,

                        Swirling,

The words go tumbling away

The years have passed,

Flown by, scattered,

Like leaves in the wind

When I think of you,

My mind goes blank

The words are lost

When I think of you,

My mind goes blank

But, my heart,

Speaks clearly, while my mind cannot,

I love you

© 2014 Victoria Kaer


Author's Note

Victoria Kaer
This is a poem I wrote a bit back for my husband. As easy as writing is, I sometimes find it rather hard to express feelings out loud to him. Seems I can't do it well without writing. (And yes, the picture is my husband and me)

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"When I think of you,
My mind goes blank
The words are lost"

Simply beautiful...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Victoria Kaer

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:).............................
Very expressive of beautiful sentiments and romantic gestures...Bravo.........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Victoria Kaer

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................

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Added on March 10, 2014
Last Updated on March 11, 2014

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Victoria Kaer
Victoria Kaer

Las Vegas, NV



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Always looking for constructive criticism on my writing if you read, please leave a comment. I'd appreciate anything helpful. (Things like, "It needs editing" don't help. Please tell me what you saw t.. more..

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