Ghostly ReasonsA Story by Victoria KaerWhy do ghosts hang around? Do we really know? When a realtor is given the task of selling a house he may just find out one reason.
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It hadn’t been a dare that led him here, not a prank, either. He wasn’t a stupid teen looking for a cheap thrill. Nothing of the sort. Still, he stood in the semidarkness of the long abandoned mansion, staring around as if he could peer into the shadowed corners and see what might lurk there, waiting to jump at him. He gave a shake of his head at his foolishness, for thinking that there might actually be something left lurking about the place. “Idiot,” he muttered and moved across the dusty, open foyer. A quick sweep of his deep brown eyes around the empty space, told of the once grand elegance of the place. Now, it was simply, dust, cobwebs, and broken shabbiness. It was going to take someone with deep pockets and a lot of time on their hands to fix this place up. It wouldn’t be him; he thought with a grin, he was simply the realtor given the task of trying to sell the place. None of his coworkers had wanted the listing. He hadn’t bothered to wonder why, simply accepted the listing and the challenge it represented with a great deal of glee. He stopped before the grand, slightly curving staircase, tilting his head to look up. A set of black lighted candelabras topped the newel posts at the bottom of the staircase. The entire place stunned him, if he wasn’t mistaken it was mostly black and white marble, and it was still in fairly decent condition beneath the layers of dust and filth. It had once been very grand and elegant. Placing a foot on the bottom step, he grasped the white iron scrollwork rail and froze as a burst of cold wind rushed down past him. Halfway up the stairs, an apparition appeared before him. It wasn’t wispy, or floating, not smoke-like, nothing ghost-like about it at all. Yet, he knew it wasn’t real. There had been no one there a moment before. Reaching up he brushed back the lock of dark hair that had fallen in his eyes when the wind had swept down the stairs. And, ever the polite and helpful realtor that he was he spoke to the ghost, “Can I help you?” The man cocked his head slightly to the side, placed a hand on the rail, and frowned. The suit he wore was a deep gray, and certainly not of this era. His hair was nearly white-blond and graying at the temples, with eyes a very pale blue and he was slightly built beneath that suit. Shaking his head just barely, he finally smiled only just before he nodded. “You’ll do just fine. You have the respect needed for the place.” Before he could ask a single question of the man, he vanished. A frown creased his brow and he called out several times. However, the apparition didn’t return. Feeling utterly foolish, he finished poking around the house, and took a few pictures. He encountered no more visions and decided it had been a hallucination brought on by hunger, since he’d skipped both breakfast and lunch today. He locked up the house, left, and went back to the real-estate office. Intent on getting the listing up before heading home for the night. Several weeks passed with not even a nibble, it wasn’t an easy place to sell. It had been on the market for an extended period several times before with no success. Several people insisted there was something not right about the place. It felt eerie inside. It took him nearly a year to sell the place and it wasn’t until the sale was final that several of his fellow realtors in the office, while congratulating him, explained why no one else had wanted the listing. “The place has been on and off the market for years. It went up for the first time in the 50s. The owner died in the place, fell down the stairs or something, rumor was he was murdered. Place creeps everyone out. Everyone who tries to sell it says the old guy won’t let them in the place, he thinks they won’t treat it right or something.” This was followed by a shrug. After listening to several of his coworkers tell similar stories, he packed up his things and left the office, heading straight to the old mansion. He let himself in, walked over to the staircase, and stepped up on to the bottom step. The immediate gust of wind swept over him and the man appeared on the staircase, smiling at him. He smiled and inclined his head to the owner of the house. “Thank you for trusting me to take care of the place. I’m honored.” The man smiled again, his head swiveled about as he looked around the foyer"as if for the final time"until his gaze once more came to land on the man standing on the bottom step. “It’s in good hands now. Thank you, William.” He vanished without another word. Carefully, he stepped down off the stairs, briefly he wondered if the man had always known his name or learned it through the many people he’d brought to see the house. When he left, he locked the front door, securing the house. As he pulled away, he wondered if the old man had stood watch over his home all these years simply waiting for the right owner to come along and take over where he had left off. He gave his head a shake and laughed. Who knew that a ghost could be that obsessive about his home? It appeared as if the man hadn’t been stuck here because he’d died a tragic death, not at all. Perhaps all those ghost hunters on TV needed to do a bit more digging before they jumped to conclusions about why spirits did what they did. Ghosts stuck around for all sorts of reasons it would seem. © 2014 Victoria KaerReviews
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3 Reviews Added on February 25, 2014 Last Updated on March 10, 2014 Tags: FlashFiction Contest3 AuthorVictoria KaerLas Vegas, NVAboutAlways looking for constructive criticism on my writing if you read, please leave a comment. I'd appreciate anything helpful. (Things like, "It needs editing" don't help. Please tell me what you saw t.. more..Writing
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