Sparks Will Fly
A Book by Victoria Kaer
She can turn the world off ... He can turn it back on ... When they're together... Sparks will fly.
© 2014 Victoria Kaer
Author's Note
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I simply want honest opinion of the overall story. I know there are some spelling errors in there, I'm in the process of doing an edit on the story at the moment, so I've taken note of those I've found.
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Author
Victoria KaerLas Vegas, NV
About
Always looking for constructive criticism on my writing if you read, please leave a comment. I'd appreciate anything helpful. (Things like, "It needs editing" don't help. Please tell me what you saw t.. more..
Writing
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