Show Low

Did you ever have any judge you without knowing YOU? Even your friends and family??

 

 Were heading for a show down

Time for the low down

 I don’t want you coming around

I say hell no

 

 

Thought you had me at the get go

 When are  you gonna let it go?

Were heading for a showdown

I say hell no

 

 

 So many things you don’t know

What the hell do you know?

You just think you know so

 I say hell no

 

Time for the low down

Time to turn it round

Time to let it go

You think you know so

Hell no

  

Were heading for a show down

Time for the low down

Don’t want you coming around

 I say hell no

 

Don’t be coming around

Want you to let it go

 I’m moving to Show Low

Apoligize to you ?

I say hell no

 

Time for the low down

Time to turn it round

Time to let it go

You think you know so

  

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is really cool with the music...... we are going to make this a demo ..I pulled this from this site once because is hard to rate lyrics... think... Gretchin Wilson,Sugarland or the Wrecker's kind of music... it is really cool with the music.lol

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I was going to say even before I read your notes that this one was highly lyrical - with a definite tempo to the words along with a straightforwad message. Lyrics ARE hard to rate, when you write something for a partnership of words and music - some poets snub the effort. I have hundreds of sets of lyrics - I hardly ever post them on the Cafe for that reason. But I love to read lyrics, personally because they are the pure thought - often prior to the music which can color them differently....Well done.

[Trée]

Many years ago I divorced. I still bear scars, not from my ex or even my family, but from friends, friends who thought they knew (they didn't) and who decided gossiping (telling tea party lies in the quaint company of kept upper middle class) was a nice afternoon activity, a sport if you will, where one takes pleasure in slandering another. I no longer have those friends--Hell No!

Love the spirit in this poem and would love to hear it sung by Sugarland. You give good poem Victoria. :-D

[Jenny Davis]

This is really very cool...would love to hear the demo :)

[Nicole Renee]

I know how that is when people judge you by your looks and if they don't know you. I've had that happen to me before. But this was really good. :]

-Nicole

[Michelle]

I like the beat to this would love to hear it with music. I take it you are a talented gal who can put the words to the music too?? Awesome! Im still figuring it out lol.

Michelle