Fly

 

 

Soaring high above the clouds

Wind rushing through broken wings

Fly away from this stormy day

Fly to the sun

Circle the moon

Away from the darkness

And impending doom

Fly through shooting stars

Take a rest on Mars

Never look back

Never let them see you cry

Just fly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

"Never let them see you cry
Just fly"

This is a great way to scream out, "I am me...and I am proud." Victoria, this is an empowering write. I think there are a lot of emotions hidden between the lines. Your presentation is gorgeous. Lydia

[Brianna Brie]

Somehow this brings hope that better days are ahead. Even though people have broken wings or pain in their lives they can soar above their circumstances. It has a gentle flow, and I absolutely love the eagle flying. Brie

[Jenny Davis]

These are words to live by! What you have written is more than beautifu and I don't think you need to change a thing with it :) Fly dear!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this ,, love the moon and stars, planets... and have always had flying dreams which are the best..
I think your line 'never let them see you cry.. Just fly' is perfect.

Chloe
xoxo

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

its just so beautiful -- so nicely done

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love it... inspirational... fly above all the hate and backstabbing to be the better person... Fly my friend cause you are not alone!!

[Dezaraye]

Beautiful. I love your imagery and the easy feel of your words. Just fly ... what a perfect way to end this.