Fly

 

 

Soaring high above the clouds

Wind rushing through broken wings

Fly away from this stormy day

Fly to the sun

Circle the moon

Away from the darkness

And impending doom

Fly through shooting stars

Take a rest on Mars

Never look back

Never let them see you cry

Just fly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

"Never let them see you cry
Just fly"

This is a great way to scream out, "I am me...and I am proud." Victoria, this is an empowering write. I think there are a lot of emotions hidden between the lines. Your presentation is gorgeous. Lydia

[Poeticpiers]

The only thing you can't fly from is yourself M'Lady. Why should you choose to hide behind a pseudonym.
I do but it started accidentally when my own namw was not accepted as a screen name but I usually sign my own name to comments and correspondence

[Charlotte Rose]

Wow this is very beautiful.. The bird flying is a great touch.. Just beautiful

[Dr Fleur]

Simplyy Awesome :) BEutiful....

[Yvonne Heidt]

Beautiful, Victoria. Loved the pic that goes with it, also. Never let them see you cry - it doesn't give them any power over you - right?

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I like this piece just as it is Victoria, and I think we all have days like this, where we need to just fly away from it all, and yes....hold that head up proudly, and never let em catch ya down....

[MilleFeori]

VICTORIA 'FLY" WAS WELL WRITTEN DEAR , YOU ARE GREAT !!!!
I HAVEN'T SEEN "FLY" BEFORE.. & WHERE ELSE WOULD I FIND IT POSTED ?
AM TRYING TO JUST FEEL THE ENERGY IN HERE,, SUCH GIFTED WRITERS. . .HMMMM
MAYBE I DON'T BELONG HERE, A WEEK NOW THAT I REGESTERED . AND I HAVEN'T PUT "PEN TO "PAPER YET... UGH !!!!!!
WHAT AM I WAITING FOR.. ???? LOL....
I'M MILLE FEORI FROM NEW JERSEY.. NICE TO "MEET" YOU VISCTORIA..
LOVELY PHOTO.. PRETTY
TAKE CARE LUV,
BE WELL BE SAFE
MILLE
XXX

[Brette Medb]

I loved it just the way it is. The flow is perfect and the feeling of hope and understanding of ones self is so strong in this piece. Broken wings can be healed as can a broken heart. Great write,


Brette

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This is just right - no need to add or remove a word. We all need to break free from the strongholds that restrain and bind our progress; to 'Fly away from this stormy day', as you so poetically wrote.

Excellent!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[Rain]

This is a soft and beautiful poem. It leaves you wanting to sail. Rain..