Reading between the lines

 

Perfect words

            Perfect lies

Fairy tale romance

            Delusional head games

Blinded by love

            Blindsided by deception

Forgiving you once

            Heartbroken twice

Paying the price

            For not reading between the lines

 

 

Reviews

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i think that is a lesson that a lot of us go through -- beautifully written -- love the font you used for this too -- i love the line "blinded by love - blindsided by deception" so many times we turn a blind eye to the one we fall in love with -- and then they end up crushing our hearts -

(game was making me too nervous - so i am reviewing - ha ha the first quarter isnt even over yet)

[Midnitefyrfly]

I think this was a really great piece of writing. Your choice of words is compelling and makes such a beautiful contrast of trust and deception. I also love the font... How do I choose pretty fonts like that?

[Everett DeValle]

Isn't that always the case, yet we go in knowing too and we get hurt in the process. I love the format; the presentation, the message. Great poem. ~Ev

[TAYLOR]

your work is always deep and heart felt....you always seem to amaze me at your talent for writing..whether this is a poem or not it is fabulous work

[James Mayfield]

I think this was smashingly well put. I always wonder why people give second and third chances, but when it comes time for me to decide whether or not to grant one I can never say no. This really was a lovely piece. Nice work.

[Legion]

You play those words well. Like a cello crying caught in the spotlight of realization. Well done. Love the font usage as well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What ever you call it this is well written as usual... Sometimes we miss those little signs as the bigger picture distracts us... a lesson to all... Great job!!