Reading between the lines

 

Perfect words

            Perfect lies

Fairy tale romance

            Delusional head games

Blinded by love

            Blindsided by deception

Forgiving you once

            Heartbroken twice

Paying the price

            For not reading between the lines

 

 

Reviews

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i think that is a lesson that a lot of us go through -- beautifully written -- love the font you used for this too -- i love the line "blinded by love - blindsided by deception" so many times we turn a blind eye to the one we fall in love with -- and then they end up crushing our hearts -

(game was making me too nervous - so i am reviewing - ha ha the first quarter isnt even over yet)

[Carole]

Being able to "read between the lines" has saved many a broken heart. So much said in so few of words. Well done, Victoria. :-)

[Trée]

The art of the poem beautifully executed in verse and line. Feels like country music, emotion raw, lesson earned, wisdom paid in regret. Very nicely done.

[Imperfection]

SHort lines and few words.
But good choice of words.
Well depicted.

I like what you've done with the font. Great effect overall.

Excellent piece of writing.

well written and well versed. This is a good read.

[Daryl]

Beautifully done! The visual presentation really makes it work.

It pretty much describes my first marriage, too.

[Brette Medb]

I liked this a lot and it was perfect! Great imagery with a great lesson.

Brette

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WOW! I really like this. "Forgiving you once.....Heartbroken twice" These two lines spoke volumes. I'm sorry you were hurt.

[James K. Blaylock]

I really do love this piece. Indeed, we so often look beyond the waiting truth.

[Papillion]

I like your play on words alot. The whole presentation is outstanding.

[Lydia Shutter]

So often we ignore the obvious between the lines. Not only are your words well written, but the presentation is excellent. Great job, Victoria. Lydia