Fade away..

 

I cannot

see or hear you

Yet  I know you are there

Every night, every day

Judging me

Watching

every move I make

Analyzing

every word I write

Twisting everything I say

into something about you

Narcissistic

 Pessimistic

 Maybe even

psychotic

You are

A fading piece of the past

that I prefer not to remember

I only have the scars from your attacks

to remind me you ever were

 The knife to the back

 should cause you the most shame

But it was your insane, angry words

that caused me the most pain

Just like the bruises left on my soul

You're just a memory

fading away

A sad scene

Just a bad dream

Fading away

Fade 

away

 

 

 

 

 

          

 

 

Reviews

[Richard McLin]

I love the color and structure of this piece, it's simply beautiful. You have done a wonderful job on not only writting a good piece, but making something that is nice to look at as well. It is always a joy to read your work, this is no exception.

Richard

[..]

An emotional write here...Well Written...Kim

[Badmac (Brenda )]

Thanks for joining my contest,
I will have a hard time picking the best
as they will all be good in my eyes
as I feel as though each poet
writes their own way.

Brenda

[Yvonne Heidt]

I have so been there. This is excellent writing, Victoria.

"But was was your insane, angry words
That caused me the most pain"

Although the bruises have faded and I wear some scars,
it is the words that were said that haunts me also.

100% Great job.

[Iretex2012]

sounds good...I like...