Terror

Terror

A Poem by Victor The Great
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What are you doing running?

Don't you know it's dark outside?

 

What are you doing screaming?

Don't you know no one will hear you?

 

What are you doing looking?

Don't you know we hide all?

 

What are you doing fighting?

Don't you know time is your only enemy?

 

You say you are living

I see

I say you are dying

You see

© 2012 Victor The Great


Author's Note

Victor The Great
My third poema! >:)
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WOW, THIS IS AWESOME!
SO DARK!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great poem victor. Fun but not really terror... You will have to go a bit darker to satisfy the title. Good write though.
Be well

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
This is great! You write short poems but poems that are really well written!
They have a lot of meaning to it of course
Love it :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! >:)

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