O, Silver Knight

O, Silver Knight

A Poem by Victor The Great
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There he goes!

What is he doing?

Is he stabbing the gold wall of their fortress?

 

Here he comes!

Where is he going?

Is he slashing away the webs that hid the truth?

 

Away he goes!

How did he know?

Is he lifting the blanket of lies we have created?

 

And he comes!

Why does he?

Is he fighting the monsters that have kept us slaves?

 

But he goes!

Why do we deserve this?

Is he walking away as we stare and stay in place?

 

That is why we deserve it

Do not return to us

O, silver knight

© 2012 Victor The Great


Author's Note

Victor The Great
My second poema!
>:)

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I can totally see where you're going with this poem and I understand your words, Victor.
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


most welcome......I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! >:)
victor the great?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Yeah, that's me
Great poem.I really like the idea behind it and the way you described everything so perfectly.Thank you for sharing this great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
I know exactly what you're talking about and it's true what you're saying.
Another awesome poema!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
Linda

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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Added on October 12, 2012
Last Updated on October 12, 2012
Tags: Society, Slavery, Freedom, Comformity, Doubt, Truth, Lies, Life

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Victor The Great
Victor The Great

Holland, Netherlands



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