The Joker

The Joker

A Poem by Victor The Great
"

HA HA HA

"

No, I didn't want to be this way

No one takes me seriously

 

No, I wasn't born to be this way

Everyone smiles at my tears

 

No, I can't be this way

One more laugh and I'll be gone

 

 

Ha, ha, ha

...

© 2012 Victor The Great


Author's Note

Victor The Great
My first poema!
*Poema is Poem is Spanish*
>:)
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Aww, this is sad but really good!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short but good! :) lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
Funny........

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Of course
Its short but it carries such a strong ideal perspective. i love it c:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
Ouch! This is really cool and all but what a sad ending
It's very strong though it's short and all
it deserves 100/100 :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
I forgot to rate lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

LOSER
Very nice! Loved it. Short and very powerful. Makes me not want to laugh though... Ha.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
carry on


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much >:)
Wow, I was just staring at the end for like so long...
This is very deep whether it looks like it or not. I like how it's short and to the point
For a first poem, it's really good!
Never knew YOU could write so well :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victor The Great

12 Years Ago

Shup up and thanks >:)

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Added on October 11, 2012
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Victor The Great
Victor The Great

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