The Death Of Me

Heard this in an awesome movie

Mad.

Mad thoughts.

Crazy, twisted.

Mad obsession, you sicken me.

Your so beautiful love.

I grind you into a soft fine powder, and inhale you.

Then I lick you off my finger tips.

New love, answer me.

Your face brings me death everyday, and everyday I can't wait to die.

Bury me now love, bury me now..

Author's Note

From a Movie " Teenage Dirtbag"

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "Mad.
Mad thoughts.
Crazy, twisted.
Mad obsession, you sicken me."
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Jamie]

Brilliant piece of poetry! Thank you for sharing :)

[Luke Ritta]

good work.....I liked it alot.

[MAC]

intimate dipped in darkness....excellent write!

[aaron]

nice, twisted, and true in some cases. i can relate.

[Seshat Nidaba]

The second half of this piece is stunning. Especially the lines "I grind you into a soft fine powder, and inhale you. Then I lick you off my finger tips." Great!

[Alvaro]

I like this a lot!

[Akshat♥]

short and sweet poem..
love is so powerful..going out of control sometime..
interesting poem..enjoyed it:)