Torn In Two

This is just words, they aint gonna sound the same. It's gonna make sense though...

I met you, my Warrior

You were broken.

I came and fixed your wounds.

Even in my black heart, I loved you. I fell for you.

I kept falling till my endless darkness consumed me.

Never more was there love like yours in my black heart.

I can barely breathe now, but I take you as you are.

Flawed.

 

Wait! What did you do?

You lied to me Warrior!

You lied to me!

Can you find your self in your lies my Warrior!?

No! I don't love you my Warrior!

I can't love a lie!

Warrior you just wanted. Wanted. Wanted.

I don't know what else to give.

Never that though.

Never that.

I see you my Warrior.

I SEE YOU!

But here I am thinking of the strength that you gave me.

I still want you my Warrior.

I still love you.

 

I see you now my Warrior and look back at him.

My Angel.

He's there for me. With me. He showed it. 

I held your hand once apon a time Angel.

You grasped my hand and lend me your grace.

I was happy with you my Angel.

That happiness spread to others.

Then you left me broken.

Again.

I see you coming back to me.

Should I open my arms to you my Angel.

Or to you my Warrior?

 

Torn In Two, between Love and Happiness. 

Don't let me drown in my own tears of frustration. 

Don't make me choose between the two.

Don't make me cry for either.

All I ever wanted was a balance.

Let me have that balance.

I still look back at my blue eyed Angel and wonder what if.

I hold on to you and look behind you and I see my Angel fly for me.

I hold your hand as I reach for my Angel. 

When I feel his grasp, you let me go. 

My hand searches for you.

I find it and let go of my Angel. 

Then my Angel looks for me.

Torn In Two, between my Angel and my Warrior.

I can never let both of you go.

A choice has to be made.

I have to make a choice.

Or I have neither.

Torn In Two, like a 'tug of war' match.

I am the center.

Please stop pulling for me.

How am I worth your strength my warrior?

How did I get your grace my angel?

Choosing between the both is like choosing between breathing and air.

I can't have one with out the other.

 

Was I Torn In Two?

I loved you Warrior.

Angel, you made me happy.

Yes I am Torn In Two.

 

No, I am not at fault here.

Or am I?

Did I lead both my Angel and my Warrior on?

Do they deserve such behaivor?

 

This is how I am Torn In Two.

I want my Warrior.

I want my Angel.

But choosing between the two is like choosong between breathing and air.

I can't have one with out the other.

Author's Note

From the heart, cause it never lies anymore....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful flow of words and story in the poetry.
"Torn In Two, between Love and Happiness.
Don't let me drown in my own tears of frustration.
Don't make me choose between the two.
Don't make me cry for either.
All I ever wanted was a balance.
Let me have that balance."
To decide right in the want of need and love. Can break us up into pieces. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MAC]

there is always that tug...love pulls us away from where we want to be and at times it may be the better direction. this is a wonderful poem about how love splits us up and it is done very cleverly! well done!

[BriAnna Wyble]

this is so beautiful, and so very powerful! the description is flawless, and it flowed in a really cool and poetic way :) i can see it being a song. well done!

[Victoria Thornton]

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[MiidniightSoul]

This is amazing. Very powerful poem

[P.S I Love You]

Wow! This is amazing!!!!! Wonderful Write. Loved this poem =) Wonderful Job!!!!

[X]

wiiiicked! but soo.... much....reading. @_@ lol i like the choosing between warrior and angel thing. very kewl

[Texas Writer]

wow Vicky.....I can kinda feel the confusion, and yearning that you express in this. I can kinda relate to it...i know the feeling. Love ya chicky!

[darkgurl]

I can't love a lie so true, This is a wonderful write here

[N/A]

this is fantastic.and I really gotta do more read review stuff, but fantastic work!