The begining

The begining

A Chapter by Victoria Thornton
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Before all that happend Sarah was a happy girl, with best friends, and a soon to be boyfriend

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" Today's hit music station 97.5 f.m." the clock blared.

Sarah woke up instantly, and hit her alarm clock back to silence.

" Come on wake up! It's school time!" her brother Mike yelled from the other side of her closed door.

" No!" she yelled throwing a pillow at the door, hearing him laughing as he walked down the hall way. She knew he was right, he always seems to be. So she got out of bed, rubbed the sleep out of her eyes and went to the rest room.

"Today better be worth getting up this early." she mutterd to her self.

" It will be don't worry." Mike said from behind Sarah making her instantly jump.

" Knock much." She half yelled. Raising his hand to the bath room door he knocked.

" A*s." she said

" That's what they call me." Mike said smiling.

" Ha ha so what's so great about today?" Sarah asked

" My band plays at Derges bar tonight." He said nonchalantly

Shocked cause her brothers band never get a gig well anywhere. She started to jump up and down and huged her brother.

" Oh my god! Congrates! When? I have to be there" Sarah said almost screaming.

" Shhh man mom and pops don't know. After last time they don't want me going to bars. Remember?" He said

How could she not, he came home smelling like beer and vomit. And of course he was more than wasted. When their parents saw him they hit the roof and banned him from and bars, which didn't stop him.

" Yeah." was all she said smiling

" It's at 11:30 tonight, bring your friends. The last thing I need is you to be kiddnapped."

She laughed and pushed him out of her room and got ready for school.

Sarah met up with her friends at school and told them about her brothers band.

" Hell yeah we'll go!" Samantha said flipping her overly dyed black hair back.

" Sure, I ain't got nothing else to do." Jessica said pushing her glasses in place.

" Great, do you want me to pick ya'll up or what?" Sarah asked

" Ummm my car is totally damaged, so yeah." Samantha replied

" I'll walk to Sammies house and you can pick us both up." Jessica said softly

" What time?"

"When does your cute brother leave?" Samantha asked

" Seriously Samantha what did I tell you about that?" Sarah said rolling her eyes in disgust.

" What? It's not my fault that your brother is seriously hot!!" Samantha said with a wide smile

" It would be kind of weird for me if you talked about my brother that way." Jessica said quietly

" That's completely different." Samantha clarified

" How?" Sarah asked

" Her brother is just unattractive." She said bluntly

At that they all bust out into laughter, as the bell rang they each went to their classes.

" We will be going over Shakespear for the next two weeks." Mrs. Connly said, Sarahs drama teacher.

" What play?" a student asked

" What do you think?" another argued

" Romeo and Juliet." Mrs. Connly annouced.

There was a groaning sound from all the students in the class.

" Now, now I am making this years play a little different." Mrs. connly said

The whole class waited for her to finish.

" We are going to do it in todays times."

" I want to be Leonardo Dicaprio!" a random student blurted out as the rest of the students laughed.

" Well I already have your rolls asigned and I am posting the sheet in a few minutes, unless you want to know now?" she asked coolly

Seperate agreements were spread across the room.

" Okay! well I will start with the lead rolls. Sarah Nelson you will be Juilet" she announced

Alot of hooting erupted and applause, causing Sarah to blush bright red.

 

 

 



© 2010 Victoria Thornton


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It is very curt. I think you could add more detail and spice it up. One minute she's at home and the next she's at school and then she's in class in just a short amount of lines. I don't advise to dumb down on the dialogue because it is building the story but you could stand to build the detail and give breath to your characters and their surroundings. Any how, I think you got something going and I would love to read more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short, but really cool. I like the setup for the story. Can't wait to read more ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago



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