Bloody Muhrje

Ever heard of bloody mary? Here's how I think it happened XP

Bloody Muhrje

A girl

In a school

Where everyone must be cool

Last name Whiey

Middle Bloody

And finally, first name, Muhrje

 

Orphaned when young

Never beautiful, never taken

 

Her mother,

As the police said, died in front the only mirror of the home

Almost as a soul was taken by the looking glass,

Never to come back.

The mothe, a most poor, bizarre thing,

Had scratched out her eyes, though not lost them in the,

Sink

The expression of death, a most horrid sight

Mortician ever said he’d seen

Able to predict her last, wailing, scream.

 

The father, quite different, his story’s seams

Muhrje saw him, too, pass through this awkward,

Deathly, portal to an unthinkably cruel torture

 

Weird enough, after the father’s untimely death,

No body was found

Just, the eyes of the mother

Lying around

Police record writes it out to be quite a sight when

Blood was found, not only outside, though, inside the mirror

Poor child, never told her story

She stayed quiet,

Never in shadows, and

Never, too far out

 

Where she went, make up went with her

As did, a bloody, stinking mirror

 

To stay at the top she had to be pretty

To stay at the top she had to be petty

And carry that mirror, EVERYWHERE

 

So, when come her time to pass through that glass

As was the family curse

 

The house was inherited to her at 18

When she walked in, that house, so long abandoned

She stared into the dark, evil glass

With pained, ‘mem’ring eyes

Saw that face, no longer covered by lies, no, her true reflection

Muhrje clapped on make-up, best as she could

Finally realizing, this glass only shows,

The deep, inner soul’s truth, with no way to hide

For it be only, herself, that pure, evil inside

Her scream, so torturous to the soul

How it still haunts mine.

Her scream rang out clear through the old house

Whiey Bloody Muhrje

Whiey Bloody Muhrje

Whiey Bloody Muhrje

At her last dying breath four corpse arms came from,

The devil’s portal,

They grabbed at her wretchedly

Poor Muhrje could, now, not back away,

Push as she may, scream as she might in her fright

Through a flash of daemons light

She was pulled to Hell, I believe, for that was it

 

Now, today that mirror be buried,

Withall that cursed junk

If there is one thing I learned

It’s never to look in a mirror

Say

Whiey Bloody Muhrje

Three times

Or to Hell I be going and never see it comin.

By quarantine_deathangel

All rights reserved

Author's Note

Wrote this off the top of my head one day, also I never knew what the story of bloody mary was, and this is meant to be a bit full of irony, especially the last line. The character Muhrje was in a family which was cursed and this is why they were in this situation, the narrator was a nanny who had stayed with the family, also Muhrje through life had become a very evil and selfish and unkind, heartless person, therefore, she freaks from her mirror imagr, this isn't really a poem it just had the spacing to help you read it better so the true energy of the write is seen. Btw the nanny is put to a certain dialect in here, she was very suspicious and she also had that southern accent where her words and grammer aren't all pronounced or perfect so that's why some of it is misspelled and other parts aer play on words, I've proof read this and there aren't any errors beyond what is effect.

Reviews

[Tamelia Jade]

- The mothe, a most poor, bizarre thing,
(Not sure if you meant that!)
^.^ Great story. Sooo creepy! Very engaging and interesting. You painted a really clear but uber creepy visual picture. I liked how you talked about her true self being revealed-her soul so to say-very cool. I also loved the last few lines. What a smart nanny! :)
Thanks for a great story! :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Interesting story about bloody mary. I enjoy it.

[Cody]

Oh yes... This was orgasmic with the dark story telling. Very rich like bloody chocolate. Charming. Very charming.

[quarintine_deathangel]

I love campfire stories for their classic plots that can still be put in a different direction or changed for a better intensity. Thanks for the review!

[Anubis]

I love this, nice and creepy.
The style is very intriguing too!

[Taylor H.]

loved this. It was very spooky

[Mockingbird]

excellent story. very visual scene; the blood the mirror. it was dark and sinister. great piece.

[SapphirianVampiress]

Utterly amazing. It was completely different and not what you would have expected. I loved it and you should keep up the writing, you are amazing :)

[Shep]

awesome story poem, it drew me in and. That's what I like. After reading your pofile, I understand you like ghost and things beyound reality. Well if like to read come read me series What's Behind the Looking Glass. Kr my new book Crimson Fire. Awesome write.

[Alex Vidmar]

Definitely different Q.Da. I really enjoyed this one. Keep it up.

Peace.

~Alex

[Daenerys]

Interesting and creepy at the same time.