A Prophecy to the Coming

~We are our own problem~

A Prophecy to the Coming

Can’t you see?!

Love and Hate

They are the same

Both requiring

Passion

Care

Greed

Envy

Want

Most of all

Destruction

        Each rip you apart!

Inside a tornado of emotion

Starting their own cycle

Crushing, unrelenting

Incredible

I have found each to be evil

        Have not You also found this truth?

Humans are the only ones with emotion

We have a ‘numb skull’

Supposedly this makes us

Different…

Lies! We are the same

All a creation

          Who cannot create

Our ideas are cut and paste!

Created in the Image

Not as a God!

        You idiots!

Quit denying your keeper

The shepherd will lead

If only you’d let him

You put those who follow instinct

Below yourselves

The human race is a psychotic parasite

to the way things are supposed to be.

We are constantly self-harming

Rejecting father’s divine prophecy

How fake do you flipping get?

        You are patternized, cut and paste

Fatherless sons

        ~self-prophesized b******s…

What great goal makes you believe this

to be a righteous, self-fulfilling ideal?

       I understand none

This is your devout inclination

When explaining holy sins for our kind

 We refuse the daemons and their lies

        I came here expecting kindness and virtue

Reality, lies and lost hope are all I’ve

Found

So next time you angels are outside

Looking in

                Please see

That glossy, tinted window you took scene to is exactly where it ends!

For all I’ve found are worldly treasures

Down here and

Oh, such a dead

Reality

Written by quarintine_deathangel

Author's Note

This was written when I was pretty fed up, deppressed and angry at the world ~.^ If it isn't obvious by the end XD I feel so many are fake and unreal in this day and when our demise happens lots of crying and whining and "it's not fair"s will come out of those who are pampering theirselves now. Many sick and twisted are in the world as are the problems they cause. I'm no perfect human [for then I wouldn't exist] however I try my best to be real, good and pure in my ways. Enjoy reading, leave reviews and if you like it, suggest it to other readers and writers. Thanx for reading! /[^.^]

Reviews

[Abhishekizy]

Your thoughts and your author's note is real. Yes, i can identify it with dejection or depression. Girl, you actually have a good feed of words in you. I would really suggest you better jolt down an epic and get it published.... you need to take this art real seriously...you have it. Bless u!

[Cody]

This sounds like something I'd write when I'm up in flames with my affectionate feelings towards a girl. Like it feels like my emotions are contradicting my mentality. I can feel a great roast of intestines and organs in this poem. Very well done. I'm giving this a 100.

[Rocans]

This one resonates with me, I for one is a person who always rebels against the socially accepted norms. I enjoyed this, your soul seems to throw your emotions at the world.

[Anubis]

This is great, it'd make a really good song too.
My kind of poem!

[Marasu4L]

Intense and quick to the point. I can also relate to this piece. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

[quarintine_deathangel]

It's really cool to hear you enjoyed this so much, Thankyou for reading and reviewing! ^.^

[Marasu4L]

No problem

[ewest1220]

And I thought my rants were good! This was amazing very powerful and direct with great purpose and fire! Thanks for having me read this!

[quarintine_deathangel]

You're welcome! Thanks for reading and giving a review! ^.^

[ewest1220]

My pleasure! :D

[Heromen Selena]

I liked this. A rant sometimes is all we need to feel better. Very powerful reality you describe here. Wonderful :)

[quarintine_deathangel]

Thankyou for the review! You're an awesome writer, so it's cool to get read by you ^.^ It's awesome you enjoyed reading ^^

[Heromen Selena]

Aw! Thank you :) You're really awesome too :)

[C.C. Marx]

Wow. You weren't nodding when you said I would like this!! I feel your pain, sometimes a good rant does wonders for you and being angry at the world and some of its shallow inhabitants works for a little while as well nice write

[quarintine_deathangel]

Cool! and very true ^^ I was listening to Sick Puppies-TriPolar and it's an awesome way to vent anger XD It's an excellent album also if you ever want some good music, it's on youtube.

[C.C. Marx]

I might just try that sometime, thanks

[Ahmad Cox]

Very powerful. There is a lot of truth in this poem

[quarintine_deathangel]

I'm glad you found it interesting. ^^