Encounters

Just something I wrote

I succumbed to them,
Those dreaded cradles of deceit,
Sending anger through me,
Like a snake through my veins

I tasted the lips of seduction,
Unexpectedly, wonderfully,
Electric sparks across my tongue,
Buzzing so excitedly

A terrible mistake made worse,
Long lost memories returned,
I hate my sudden immobility,
I should’ve backed away

Secretive, no eyes saw this deed,
Warm breath upon my own,
Pressed together, just briefly,
The lips which smile thereafter

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

A terrible mistake made worse,
Long lost memories returned,
I hate my sudden immobility,
I should’ve backed away




Sounds like someone was pressed up against a wall in heart, body , mind and lust.

[~VertoAtrum~]

When it was happening, I did feel very helpless. It's not a good feeling, not being able to move away when your body is so immobilized.

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

I really really liked this, you are quite talented, you are very good as expressing feeling in your work but at the same time keeping it veague. Something I struggle to do often.
Over all I very much enjoyed this. :D