Haiku, Bond

My first ever Haiku. Please let me know what you think =]

I see through her eyes,

She’s the puma, spirit guild,

We see us, bonded

Reviews

[Baban.A.A]

I very much like short lines, within which a wide range of meaning is buried. with each word you have to twice or thrice read it and then together with the line to find out its meaning. she is Puma; very poetic indeed, and she is a spirit guide towards what? life maybe, love maybe, death may be, there are lots of interpretations, and then We see us, I very much liked this, I myself have used these pronouns interchangably which gives a quite good variety of misleading and confusion. very well poem, and best luck.

[~VertoAtrum~]

My worry with making such a short piece was that it wouldn't have much substance to it. I'm very glad to know that wasn't the case. Thank you for such a kind review, I really appreciate it =]