Let Me Out

Angry feeling can sometimes escalate from the smallest things, but yet can make you remember the biggest of things. When I'm angry, I change, and this is what it feels like to be her.

The creature inside is writhing,

Such a simple cause,

Yet it has released the passion of a thousand lovers,

And the rage of a hundred monsters,

Eyes misting into black, focused on the throat,

Release me! Let me out!

So I can scratch my skin, kick the walls out,

Scream my sins at the ceiling,

I’m tired of living beneath the sheets,

Of feigning recognition,

My real face is showing through,

Like the moon shining through the night,

I can hear you breathe,

Feed my fire, speak the lies,

I want to make you writhe,

Release me! Let me out, you f****r!

I am here and I am pissed,

F**k your s**t, don’t open your lips,

Come on, fool, let’s dance

Reviews

[MikeV]

I can totally relate to this, i have anger problems aswell
and bi polar, one minute I'm pissed and the next I'm just blah
very good write :)

[Sami Khalil]

You can't help but love this poem...Splendid...:)

[Tania]

i loved it, beautiful it inspired me

[Winchester Saltgunner]

i love this it some how in a weird way invites people into your soul

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Interesting, self battle and unique.

[Cursed]

I love this piece. I feel so connected with it.