For A Girl I Used To Love

For A Girl I Used To Love

A Poem by ~VertoAtrum~
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Complicated....

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There are some people I cannot forget,

One of them being this girl that I met,

When we were young I had not a clue,

That I would fall head over heels for you,

It took me some time to get these things strait,

But by the time I did, it was almost too late,

However my luck took a turn at long last,

When one day we stopped and sat down for a chat,

You divulged things to me that I never believed,

Then I heard the confession, that you liked me,

My heart took a leap and happiness sprung,

I was wordless, breath caught in my lungs,

We let it sink in, this fresh new concept,

It was the only change I would ever accept,

Later in secrecy, we both took a risk,

And pushed both our boundaries, and went for the kiss,

The music was blaring, the crescendo had reached,

And it was more perfect than I could have dreamed,

And still in this moment I remember the day,

When we had thrown all our insecurities away,

And showed our true feelings that we had for each other,

But sadly for me, there now is another,

Whose got that privilege to call you his own,

And it’s ripped the bark off the tree that we’ve grown,

The limbs were our memories, the flowers our heart,

And now all the pieces have been ripped apart,

I never can blame you, you did nothing wrong,

But now I sing a chorus without any song,

It’s a dumb thing to say, but I do hope you’ll see,

That no matter the time, you’ll always have me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2015 ~VertoAtrum~


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A few edits are needed, understood the over all emotion, might need to run through this to check for a few tune ups.

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