Rain

The pouring rain a melody, it lulls the mind to sleep.
Each droplet, an added instrument, plays to the darkened clouds that weep.

Reviews

[Edward Estlin]

It's outstanding as it is. To add more would ruin the beauty of its simplicity.

[Aventicus]

I believe you should expound upon this. It is fantastic as an introductory stanza for a longer poem.

[Ella]

Short and sweet. I liked it.