I wish I could die

I wish I could die
Let the tide controlled by death drag me in
Pull me under
Take my breath
I can't do it myself
But I toy with the idea of trying
It would all go away, then
The indescribable pain
The loneliness

Not even death wants me

Author's Note

Reviews

[Misery]

Not a dark poem, but a poem that strolls through dark places. Our wishes are not too dissimilar, dear poet. Mine lean towards wishing I'd never been born. Since we are here in this life we might as well write about it. I hope you keep yourself alive so you can write the hell out of this life/existence.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

This is very well said. I like the last line especially. Not even death wants me. A great expression of loneliness and hopelessness. I've been there. Thanks for sharing this.

[Silver]

you expressing yourself beautifully , we all have those thoughts

[Ashwin Thakur]

Death is immortality
Our ideas imprinted in our lifeless minds
The scriptures of life as seen by you
Nice poem.....
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