I am empty now

I need to put into words what just consumed me.

I think I've broken
The pain comes in spasms
Crippling my body
Shaking, gasping, clenching
My skin burns only to turn to ice
Leaving me shivering under the blankets
I want it to stop
It hurts everywhere
Im crying uncontrollably feeling helpless
I'm giving in, it's feeding off my defeat
The pain comes harsher now, pulling me into blackness.
I can't make it stop.
Finally it is full.
I am empty now.

Reviews

[Beaner166]

I like what you've written. I hate reviewing pieces like this. it seems like it comes from deep within you and you are writing to get it out. I love pieces like this but feel that because they come from emotions that they shouldn't be reviewed. Writing has always been my escape and the way I work through issues. No one can understand what happened that lead to your writing, so don't let there reviews weigh on how you feel about your piece. I'm babbling now so I'll close with great write.

[life junior]

Your poem is so deep. I like it. Keep on writing more poems.

[Kat]

There is a lot of emotion put into this poem and I really like that it makes the reader feel something. It was very well written. Keep writing, you have talent!
-Kat