HIM.

His eyes called out to me,

His smile took my breath away.

His touch made me want him more.

..my body ached for him wanting to be filled.

..his caresses electrified every inch of me.

I opened without hesitation.

Like a sea embracing a diver.

Destined to seek that pearl.

..his mouth made me moan.

..like ripples of energy ready to burst.

His eyes overpowering.

That look that made me wild with want.

..his flesh drove my insides in a sensation of shaking ecstasy.

..his body mingled with my spasms.

..he erupted me like a hot molten lava.

..that spasmodic shake that seem to lift me higher.

..that pleasure engulfed every pore of my bodice.

...I moaned in total bliss.

His throaty moans attuned with mine.

His muscles hardened as he lets out that warm tingling shiver.

It made him lose his strength as he succumbed to my embrace.

My breathing hummed with his heartbeat.

Seemed to entwine with mine...

Reviews

[Trace]

This is a beautiful expression of passion and fulfillment.
almost need a mature tag but you wrote it so sensuality and almost discreet that it could be other than what we know it is
and that would be:
HOT HOT HOT.
the way making love should be.

Very erotic. Trace

[Veronica DiMarco]

Metaphor is my middle name..heheh

Thank you Trace!

[MsJewel]

Sensual and filled with passion, yet written tastefully which gave it the romantic flavor that I love. Beautiful poetry my friend.
:) Julie

[Veronica DiMarco]

Thanks Julie... I try my best.. ;D