Twilight

He was the darkness, she was the light.

Their unison, they said, was just not right.

Fought all odds, came together,

Earth witnessed twilight!

Reviews

[Arjun Singh]

Well, I c dt u r gd at short poems..
Ur poems hv depth nd meaning, nd r gd!!
A gd write

[Vernika]

Thanks for the review. :)

[ANTO]

I could see this belonging to a slew of creation-style poems/myths/stories to explain why things are the way they are or just as a story for children. Cleverly done.
:)

[Vernika]

Thank you! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

compact and effective.......
beautifully expressed.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Vernika]

Thank you so much! :)

[Marie]

Twilight...actually, twolight...

Interesting poem.

[Vernika]

Thank you! :)

[Pash]

wow, short but fascinating

[Vernika]

Thanks! :)