Secrets

Secrets

A Story by Vernika

Her belly bump camouflaged in her crimson lehenga and in the reflection of the sacred pyre. The bride-to-be walked very slowly, hiding secrets both in her body and in her soul.

© 2015 Vernika


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Great :) now i wanna see her. awesome write. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vernika

9 Years Ago

Thankyou! :)
A writer

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Very good. A beautifully mysterious story told in just two lines.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vernika

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Beautiful smooth piece of writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vernika

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your kind words! :)
The soul of flash fiction lies in the power of the few lines that it comprises of. And you have revealed the 'secret' beautifully indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vernika

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Glad that you liked it! :)

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Added on May 30, 2015
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Vernika
Vernika

Delhi, Hindu , India



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