Secrets
A Story by
Vernika
Her belly bump camouflaged in her crimson lehenga and in the reflection of the sacred pyre.
The bride-to-be walked very slowly, hiding secrets both in her body and in her soul.
© 2015 Vernika
Reviews
Great :) now i wanna see her. awesome write. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
You are welcome :)
Very good. A beautifully mysterious story told in just two lines.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very good. A beautifully mysterious story told in just two lines.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much! :)
Beautiful smooth piece of writing.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Beautiful smooth piece of writing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for your kind words! :)
The soul of flash fiction lies in the power of the few lines that it comprises of. And you have revealed the 'secret' beautifully indeed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
The soul of flash fiction lies in the power of the few lines that it comprises of. And you have revealed the 'secret' beautifully indeed.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much! Glad that you liked it! :)
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Added on May 30, 2015
Last Updated on June 1, 2015
Author
Vernika Delhi, Hindu , India
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An aspiring writer. Dreamer. Believer in magic.
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