Never

Dead...never
your memories...I did sever.
You...mean nothing to me
Me...am now truly free.
You...are only hollow
The world's advice...you blindly follow.
Never...should you feel real joy
Because...you want only a boy.
Who...will let you pull his strings
Maybe...even will for you he sings.
That...you are so lovely
But...when really you are so ugly.
My eyes...shed no tears
Never...now or for many years.
Why...because you do deserve this
Also...you shall never know wedded bliss.
Karma...is now and forever
Happiness...for you is not now but...never.

Author's Note

I decided to write this in a different manner. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Jess]

woah!!is that a curse in your ending?anyway,i like this poem much:)though it paints great anger.,

[Aya]

i like this poem alot, it shows great hate i believe
my fav. line is "The world's advice...you blindly follow." that calls that really she is a ridicule woman
some rhyming could've been done better but over all great one.

[Alana McGuire]

Unique style choice! I really enjoyed the line about wedded bliss. Very nicely worded :)

[koty bell]

i loved it man ur style reminds me of me in a way great work

[Laura Maidah]

You rhyme scheme is a slight issue for me. It's great in most lines, but some of them are clunky for my tastes. "Joy" and "boy" was one such example. I felt like you were stretching for the right rhyme instead of the right word. Such a tiny flaw to a gem of a poem. Thanks!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Karma...is now and forever
Happiness...for you is not now but...never.
.................Yes you have defined differently about the expression of feelings by human being. Best write. Kindly do write with philosophical point of view. Good thought.

[CourtneyShay]

this is great i like it

[Deandra Dawn]

I like it....I think you did a great job with it. :)

[Chesney W.]

this is good, , bashing the person you truly despise.. a really good write about how much you honestly don't like this person... good job

[Mockingbird]

really expresses bitterness for someone who hurt him. now he is empowering himself to get on with his life. i guess she's paying for her sins...you get what you give. excellent poem.