If You Knew the Truth

A brief look at life.

What you never see is what I feel,
The unrelenting lies that strive to become real.
My eyes are all you need to see,
To know what really happened to me.
The way I walked those avenues alone,
Holding all the memories of emptiness I'm shown.
So look into my eyes and build walls wide and tall,
So you hear me not a little, but not even at all.

Reviews

[Aya]

i totally love this one
every thing is said beautifully
wonderful write :)

[Laura Maidah]

I love how you said "avenues" instead of the common "streets". I love the concept of building walls and encasing the "self". This is very inspired. NIce!

[MoriartyMesa]

This has that nice Creedence Clearwater Revival tone to it. Like a rare song on the b side no one knows about, just a select few.

[Chesney W.]

i honestly like this.... hands down.... truly great ...excellent job with this!

[Brittany]

Really good. Woundering what or who hurt you tomake you wright this.

[hopelessromantic]

i love it it makes me wounder what happened to you

[Sunflower]

This is very well written, i can feel pain in this

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the eyes are the gateway to the soul..they speak a language beyond words.