Remains

Remains

A Poem by Cameron

You left us those years ago

disappered at first.

Almost drove me insane

as my heart nearly burst.

The stories are now dreams

I wake up hurt.

I remember those memories

clutching tightly my shirt.

You fear me now

I'll wear those crimson stains.

Ash to ash you'll fade

so no nothing ever remains.

© 2012 Cameron


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You got talent, Ive never been going at writing those.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I felt the pain:(''so nothing ever remains''yeah,it's very easy to say,but for some,,forgetting someone you truly love is a damn suicide..if only the heart easily forgot,and if only the wound and scars easily heal caused by the person you love,then you will eventually learn to love again...anyways,,great piece Cameron

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Aya
great cameron the rhyming id beautiful here and you express pain eloquently
great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your words totally expel the pain you were put through without holding back any punches. Brilliantly, you remind this person whom hurt you that he/she will pay. Write on!

Posted 12 Years Ago


ash to ash is my favorite line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"nothing ever remains" and that's the sad truth. Beautiful though!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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lei
beautifully sad...!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I feel the pain...but no need for a mature rating. It's just clean...pure...human emotions running it's fiery course.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cameron

12 Years Ago

Alright I'll knock it down a few notches. Thanks Muse.
beautiful and a little haunting from the line "You fear me now"... excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad but beautifully said my friend, I know you and the story behind... You did a very good job on this. Bravo xx

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 15, 2012
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Cameron

Mary Esther, FL



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