Her name was Hope

Part 1 : Ouch

All I knew, was that at the moment, I was lying on the ground.
With every kick, I would swing to the other side.
I tasted blood in my mouth.
My stomach felt ask though someone had dropped a heavy weight on it.
The pain was over whelming.
Suddenly it stopped.
"Am I dead?" I wondered.
I cautiously opened one eye lid.
The sun peeked through the tall shapes before me.
My vision was fuzzy from all the pain.
I heard a whisper in my ear.
"Don't forget your place, loser" Jason said in a threatening tone.
With a final kick, Him and his posse left.

I think I lay there for another 15 minutes, trying to get back to my senses.
i tried getting up , but the pain in my sides and stomach was killing me.
I spit out the blood in my mouth, and took a deep breath.
Forcing myself up, I walked over, still in pain, to where my bag had been thrown.
Lucky for me, Jason didn't take my phone.
I dialled my mom's number.
"Hello?" came her calm voice form the other end.
"Hey mom, Im really sorry but i can't pick up Tegan today." 
" Sigh. I hope there is a good excuse for this. You do know that this is the fourth time you haven't picked up your little sister from school!"
"I know mom. Im really sorry and there IS a good reason why I haven't picked her up"
"Then I'll see you when you get home, sweetie"
"Bye mom"
I hung up and put my headphones in.
I was shaking.
Not from fear, but from anger.
I was angry because this was not the first time this has happened.
I was angry because it happened over and over again, and I couldn't do anything.
I took a deep breath of air.
Turning on "In The End by Linkin Park", I walk towards the bus stop.
The bus stop that is usually crowded with girls talking about shopping, make up and their crushes is completely empty and quiet. 
Not that i have a problem with that.
I begin to think about what happened about 45 minutes ago.

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I think this is about a personal hurtful experience

This makes one sad and angry at the same time

And I think the parents should be involved in this because if they're not it will only makes things worst

There's a lack of use of metaphors which will make this perfect

And since you're only 14 I'll say "Great Job" and won't say more to be kind (because you said in your 'About me' : "don't judge me to harshly " so I won't :D)

And I've really liked this one and applaud your creativity

PEACE