Lost

not my best....

Trapped like a mime in a box.

Suffocating as though there is no air.

Cornered like an innocent hare.

You were my friend,

but friends dont last.

We often lost them in our past.

You wanted power, took control,

and i just let you, waiting for a fall.

But word by word, 

you fractured me,

im kinda fragile, you see...

and just right now 

i realized

that i am sick of my own lies

so heres the truth,

loud and clear :

I changed, and so have you. 

And even though this is my fear,

you've lost me as a friend, my dear,

a long , long time ago

when you decided to take control.

Reviews

[*Private Person*]

This one gripped my heart and tugged.
Very nicely written and powerful.

[MarcoftheBeast]

i felt your poem.... and that's how it became a great piece. very well done.