All Alone

I wrote this about a person i know. It has no negative emotions. just a call out. this person can be a very big follower and im calling out to him to change.

Here you sit.
Alone and sad.
No one around ,
But you are glad.
The hate is back from way before.
Its knocking, trying to break your door.
What have I done?
You think again.
But all u do is run.
You run from problems, big or small.
Watching everyone as they fall.
But as you slither like a snake,
You do not realize that all it takes,
Is a bit of power and control
and then you can stand tall.
Respect your friend and enemies.
Bring peace among us.
Please!
But you just sneak away.
YOU EEL.
You'll never feel the love for real....

Reviews

[*Private Person*]

Wow powerful and so emotional.
You did well expressing your feelings

[MarcoftheBeast]

a piece full of angst and anxiety.... a total masterpiece for a young writer like you.. i hope to read more from you. have a great one.