Dear Mother

She's never there.
All the pain that I went through,
She never cared.
And all those times I hid and cried,
She slept unharmed,
as the night passed by...

Reviews

[*Private Person*]

sad write, well expressed.
I know the feeling of someone not caring.

[MissWordSmith]

You are a poet, girl!
This was so... beautifully, tragically, melodiously written.
It was... the deepest of hurt, put in the most peaceful way.
I'm glad I read this, it's really good.

[Gone]

Not bad at all. Short, simple, but has a clear message that most people could at least relate to.